Intro

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Oct 4, 2015 4:34 AM #1406962
im working on an intro, heres what i have so far.
http://www.filz.us/view/596a7627-a28/
can i get some suggestions?
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Oct 4, 2015 5:24 AM #1406976
Pretty good music synching. I'd suggest more of an intro with the words, and a slightly thicker line. Besides that, I just don't like that song in general, but eh XD
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Oct 4, 2015 5:29 AM #1406977
very bland and too long for an intro
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Oct 4, 2015 7:10 AM #1406994
Needs more effects In It but yeah It's still In progress
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Oct 4, 2015 7:38 AM #1406999
thanks for the suggestions and Arch, its still a WIP. and its only that long because i couldnt find a song with a base drop that i could fade out without making it sound weird.
??? what do you mean with words, like where the word rotates around in 3d, i dont have enough time for that
and karimoo, what do you mean by effects?

EDITED VERSION
http://www.filz.us/view/acedd3b8-f34/
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Oct 4, 2015 3:37 PM #1407043
On phone so I can't see if you fixed it, but I meant there was no transition from where the word was NOT there, and then it just was there. Looked odd.
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Oct 5, 2015 1:55 AM #1407100
Quote from ???
On phone so I can't see if you fixed it, but I meant there was no transition from where the word was NOT there, and then it just was there. Looked odd.


Thats because the base dropped. Its supposed to look like that (btw on my phone)
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Oct 12, 2015 1:19 AM #1408246
Ummm... do you have a Deviantart? Coz' I can't view stuff in Fileize and I was wondering if I could see your intro
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Oct 12, 2015 9:04 PM #1408402
Quote from Dragzor
Ummm... do you have a Deviantart? Coz' I can't view stuff in Fileize and I was wondering if I could see your intro


oh yeah, i noticed filz was being a bitch lately lol.
http://pewdieoriginz.deviantart.com/art/Intro-565846771
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Oct 12, 2015 10:24 PM #1408412
Fileize never works. Jeff even recommended switching to DA or some other file hosting service.