The title says it all, I'm around 70% done with my (first) RHG's demo. Then I decided to take a rest, and I was wondering if i could make the thread and then finish the demo afterwards.

The mods will lock it if you don't post it all in one go.

Ah.. Alright.. Thanks, I'll copy and store what I got for my RHG Character Sheet and return to that demo then.

You're free to post it here though if you want feedback.

I appreciate the fact that someone for once at least asked if this was ok or not

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I appreciate the fact that someone for once at least asked if this was ok or not

Pretty sure there's a thread that tells you to do this.

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Pretty sure there's a thread that tells you to do this.

The Making Your RHG thread does tell you that you need everything all at once, but a lot of people either 1) don't read it or 2) read it, but don't read it to the end and miss that part. At least this guy asked about it before making his thread unlike others

LuCiel

Abilities:

- Ciel's Poison/Venom - Ciel (The snake(s) behind Lu's back) is able to produce venom and poisons of varying effects, example include: Standard Harming, Blinding (if applied to the eyes), Numbing, Paralyzing, and a venom that causes your muscles to spasm uncontrollably

- Extendable Snakes - Of course, what use are snakes on your back if you can't extend and expand them properly? LuCiel is also able to hide Ciel inside his back if he wishes.

- Lu's Superhuman Strength - Quite self explanatory, body's is as much as 5 times more power than a normal person with the same muscle size


Weaknesses:

- Both Lu and Ciel will die if one of them dies. But you need to kill all of Ciel's clones if you want Lu to die with him. Which my prove to be difficult because of LuCiel's ability to hide Ciel away in his back

- Frost, or anything chilly, snakes don't like that, nor do humans that don't produce heat

- Glass cannon, basically means that LuCiel packs quite a punch, but is not very durable. He's just as durable as a normal guy.

Story: (Grab a chair folks this will take a while... Skip to the 2nd to last paragraph for an explanation of what LuCiel actually is)


Once upon a time, not too long ago, there was a young boy, named "Lu". Lu had a somewhat healthy obsession with snakes, logically caused by living near a zoo specialized with the reptiles. Lu of course, went to this zoo a lot, eventually going there without his parents, and made friends with of only the care-takers, but many of the snakes too. He merely played and fed the little ones at first, even though he was trusted by the staff. Months passed before he even trained some of the bigger ones, ones that are just as big as he was. Then, a one of his favourite snake's laid an egg, before passing away. Overwhelmed as if he had lost a loved one, he had a driving desire to protect the egg, and what comes out of it.

It wasn't until the little snake became slightly mature until he was able to take care of it, like the snake's parent. The zoo-keepers even let him name the snake, "Ciel, Together, we'll be the Lu/Ciel Duo!" Together, the two created an unbreakable bond, as if they were brothers. Later on, the zoo-keepers let Lu take Ciel home with him, his parents weren't completely taken back when they saw a snake acting as a scarf on Lu when he came home. Ciel was never a threat to the Croxford family, but was otherwise to those who threatened it. But at that point, Ciel was only able to kill by constricting.

A few years later, Lu found himself chained to stone slab, without an explanation, who would have knew that the Lu/Ciel Duo would be complete at that point? Experiments were made to both the poor young man and snake, eventually giving Ciel the ability to produce a dangerous venom. Neither of them remembered how long did the torturing last, for they have not seen the sun, nor much else other than inky darkness. When they were finally released, Lu notice a change, he no longer produced heat by himself, nor is his tongue thick, but thin and forked. He could feel a strange slithery sensation on, no, IN, his back. It was Ciel, and a couple of clones of him, fused into his back, together they are now "Luciel".

Now, the reason why Lu and Ciel were fused into one and were given powers beyond any other human is because they were meant to be a super-soldier. But the brain-washing part partially failed; only Ciel was affected. After release, Lu can not bring himself to accept his new body, he never had. Because of the specialist's attempts to keep him in check and such, at one point it angered both Lu and Ciel. Leading to a total destruction of the facility. The specialist were not prepared, assuming that the partial failure in brain-washing wouldn't reflect on them badly, and were dispatched quite easily.



Demo:



Battles:

Points:

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Shoot, I think i just double posted the RHG CS post.

Proof that I have to get used to the systems of this forum

AAAANNND... I finished the Demo, and posted the thread. Now i have to wait for the mods to let the thread become true.

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AAAANNND... I finished the Demo, and posted the thread. Now i have to wait for the mods to let the thread become true.

Actually you just gotta get your post count up

So how many posts do i exactly need?

20 posts minimal, but make sure you don't spam if you're willing to post things around this forum. :o

Intriguing... I think I saw a guy with 3 posts and a RHG already, I think I'll go watch some anime for now then.

If you post a thread that contains links with under 20 posts it will be auto modded as you won't be able to see it. When this happens just tell one of the mods and they'll fix it for you.