Rhg krom

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Oct 17, 2015 8:57 PM #1409310
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Weapon: katana
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Ability:
-Hand to Hand combat
- Sword combat
He can run a average speed

Weakness:
Long range
Toxic
Water elements
Over confident
To merciful

Availibility:
Not now

Hitlist:
Zhen

Points
0/0/0

Battles
None

About: very merciful
And talks only a little

Age: 23

Demo: https://youtu.be/3ufjFiHA6lI

Relationships:
None

Story:
Krom was pressured by his daily for getting into rhg his dad never could because he had cancer and a broken leg and krom knew how much his dadwanted it so krom had to make his dad proud krom trained for nights and nights until he saw progress in his talent but when krom's dad died he. It was bad for krom so just used it as motivation to get into rhg and so he did.
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Oct 17, 2015 10:24 PM #1409327
Why is he weak to water? And everybody is weak toxic things unless stated otherwise.
And to what extent does his weakness to water go to? Is the moisture in the air enough to to affect him?
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Oct 17, 2015 10:25 PM #1409328
One day. Someone who Is bold enough will make a water RHG. And he sure will kick every ass...Other than that Goodluck fighting.
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Oct 17, 2015 10:30 PM #1409329
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One day. Someone who Is bold enough will make a water RHG. And he sure will kick every ass...Other than that Goodluck fighting.


Lol people have done water rhg's before.
And that was my 6th rhg idea tho....
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Oct 17, 2015 10:41 PM #1409331
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Why is he weak to water? And everybody is weak toxic things unless stated otherwise.
And to what extent does his weakness to water go to? Is the moisture in the air enough to to affect him?



He cant swim or hold is breath for long so if someone made a water bubble and trapped him in it he would be out of luck
Basically



But any cnc on the demo???
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Oct 17, 2015 11:03 PM #1409338
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He cant swim or hold is breath for long so if someone made a water bubble and trapped him in it he would be out of luck
Basically


Then say that. Saying that he is weak to water implies a weakness akin to devil fruit users from one piece, as they cannot physically touch large amounts of water or else they lose their strength.

Oh, and for Cnc on the demo....I will not give any yet.
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Oct 17, 2015 11:10 PM #1409339
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But any cnc on the demo???

Your demo is pretty good gl
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Oct 17, 2015 11:24 PM #1409343
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Your demo is pretty good gl
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Oct 17, 2015 11:29 PM #1409345
Quote from EBSpazzer





But any cnc on the demo???


I would recommend you actually show him fighting someone, instead of him just slashing at the air. Other than that, it looks pretty smooth.
I also left a suggestion in the youtube video.
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Oct 18, 2015 12:25 AM #1409351
Well one stop making it black each time he does a attack, It's pretty choppy in general, and the blur for the sword could've been made better. Otherwise I'd like to see some actual fighting to see your reaction time. There wasn't much to cnc as it was like 5 seconds and he literally just slashes the air. Also there's a bit of resizing. Use guides and work on your smoothness and the blur slash (Example you see the black thing that goes behind your sword. Make it more pointy and maybe less visible and add more frames to smooth it out)
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Oct 18, 2015 12:32 AM #1409353
simple sword eh, btw nice work on that sword trail