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mizu-sempai and all other master , if i may , i wanted to ask you where is the good , the mistake , and all like that , and what can i do to improove my drawing.

make them lines more confident bruh. you probably know what I'm going to say, but do some shapes. Simple ones, then 3d ones, then complex ones.

Take a look and the general resources too. Plenty of good shit in there to help you.