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Sura vs Zhen (forfeit)

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Nov 30, 2015 11:21 AM #1419479
sadly h2dynamo forfeit he had some personal things come up. i gave him another chance but he wont reply
so enjoy my anim

http://lmetaloxide.deviantart.com/art/RHG-5-Sura-vs-Zhen-575351150
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Nov 30, 2015 8:10 PM #1419529
Not too shabby but it looks pretty lazily done honestly. It's a shame that dude forfeited though.
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Nov 30, 2015 11:59 PM #1419557
I liked the animation, but I kinda think that the ending was kinda rushed. Wished it was longer. All in all I think you did a nice job on the animation.
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Dec 1, 2015 12:26 AM #1419559
Good animation of yours. Too bad he forfeit.
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Dec 1, 2015 3:14 AM #1419587
these forfeits are multiplying rapidly, i'm surprise since the guy was only online yesterday, nice battle tho
haven't seen that style in a while, nice
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Dec 1, 2015 3:46 AM #1419591
Yeah. It's a shame that these forfeits are moving like like a plague.
Anyway nice battle. Hope we can battle for some time :P
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Dec 1, 2015 5:17 AM #1419607
Quote from Mark XD
these forfeits are multiplying rapidly, i'm surprise since the guy was only online yesterday, nice battle tho
haven't seen that style in a while, nice


True, it seems like more and more forfeits are nowadays happening. I wonder why.
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Dec 1, 2015 7:22 PM #1419792
Quote from Mark XD
these forfeits are multiplying rapidly, i'm surprise since the guy was only online yesterday, nice battle tho
haven't seen that style in a while, nice


Yeah, well its a good anim practice to me tho
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Dec 1, 2015 9:16 PM #1419805
The animation was fine, although there are 2 points I wanna bring up
First one is colors: sometimes it was difficult to understand what was going on because I could not understand if that brown was the ground or the mountains in the distance
Second one is music choice: the mood/vibe it gives off does not go well with the one your animation gives. Also, it is not advised to use a song used into another animation, since if someone has watched both yours and Kursura's one, he will probably compare them
For anything else, I'd say to work on smoothness and stick construction a bit more
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Dec 1, 2015 10:46 PM #1419815
(ignore this if this goes against your style of animating) i would increase brush smoothness, the figures' movements look fine, its just how bumpy they look looks like it needs fixing.
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Dec 6, 2015 8:04 AM #1421134
Nice music choice. :)
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