Nevermore (About to get Revamp)

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Dec 1, 2015 2:03 PM #1419738
*Reason for Revamp: some of his ability are really hard to animate ...... not really hard but the result make the animation look really laggy so i decide he gonna get some change, the change will not kill him like turn him into another RHG or something like that

*WhiteChapel Jester
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The name that change in time: Hidden; Atlas; Him; He; nevermore; Raven lord; Whitechapel; Jester
*Personality: Nevermore is calculating, sadistic, and cunning sociopath/Psychopath (whatever you like to call. He hangs back and observes in many battles, looking for a single opponent who captures his interest. Once found, he pursues and provokes them with mind games until the two meet for their final battle. He also enjoys manipulating other people, he does not consider cutting his allies down is a betrayal, because in his own world, he has no allies. He don't view other people around him as human, he view them as tool, toy, doll and sometime obstacle and when he see an obstacle, he found happiness and he rarely will kill them but rather toy and destroy his obstacle life either by killing his love one or basically making his obstacle handicapped
Despite all of that, he never consider himself evil, he think that it is human nature, the same nature in the wild life, when he was a human, he say "rather i hurt them than let's them hurt me"
Even everybody around him call him crazy, he think himself as a visionary for have a different point of view, he can see the positive in the negative or at least he try to

*Ability: 2 form
-Link Form:
>Ability
+Cursed blade: had the ability to grow sword-length blades from virtually anywhere on his body and could strengthen them by channeling his desire to destroy into the blades; wound cause by his blade will not heal normally, cell activity in the impacted areas slowed down, so the wounds remained open far longer than they would normally. This would increase the chances of his victims dying from blood loss
+High tech weapon
>Weakness: sonic wave can disrupt him and stun him; light power
-Nevermore: after a while, Atlas gather enough information about his foe and turn into this form
>Ability:there only 2 ability on this form and he can use one, cant change
-Your worst nightmare: after a while, he will has the ability to become his enemy worst fears, have power of the enemy weakness
-Assimilate: mimic enemy ability but change it into his verson, will become stronger or weaker depend on the ability
>weakness: Assimilate : will also copy enemy weakness
Hit him hard enough and he will lose all the data about you and turn back into his normal form

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*Relationship

The vig

*Demo:http://atlasanimation.deviantart.com/art/Boom-Boom-571546301
http://atlasanimation.deviantart.com/art/Hidden-dead-575544655


Win/Lose: 0/0
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Dec 1, 2015 2:44 PM #1419748
I like this guy, but could you elaborate on his abilities a little bit? And revise his story to make sense?
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Dec 1, 2015 4:55 PM #1419777
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I like this guy, but could you elaborate on his abilities a little bit? And revise his story to make sense?

I second these notions.
Try using a different point of view.
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Dec 1, 2015 10:35 PM #1419813
he has two weaknesses. add some more man! "-Destroy his whole body" is kind of obvious, unless he can regenerate limbs or can create clones like in Heroes Reborn, in which case you should add that to the abilities. having fire alone as a weakness will be hard for your opponent to use, and it kinda makes it unfair, i recommend adding some more. Demos are fantastic though, nice job on them.
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Dec 1, 2015 11:31 PM #1419824
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he has two weaknesses. add some more man! Demos are fantastic though, nice job on them.

I agree with this man. I'm hyped to see you animate in the future. GL!
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Dec 2, 2015 12:12 AM #1419829
Damn, that was a great demo. Kind of creepy though. And the English was kind of bad as well.
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Dec 2, 2015 12:19 AM #1419836
UGH


UGH


UGH

noice RHG ^-^
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Dec 2, 2015 3:11 AM #1419870
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he has two weaknesses. add some more man! "-Destroy his whole body" is kind of obvious, unless he can regenerate limbs or can create clones like in Heroes Reborn, in which case you should add that to the abilities. having fire alone as a weakness will be hard for your opponent to use, and it kinda makes it unfair, i recommend adding some more. Demos are fantastic though, nice job on them.

I dont think he need anymore weakness consider his power isn't really that strong and his second weakness is just a bane and the reason why you have to "Destroy his whole body" is because........he basicly a robotic corpse AKA "zombie"for short
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Dec 2, 2015 10:32 PM #1420193
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I dont think he need anymore weakness consider his power isn't really that strong and his second weakness is just a bane and the reason why you have to "Destroy his whole body" is because........he basicly a robotic corpse AKA "zombie"for short


so does he reattach limbs or regenerate them? destroying the whole body is a weakness for almost all RHG characters. i just think it would give more opportunity for a good fight with better combat instead of having your opponent just try to crush him with a giant boulder or blast fire at him. at least elucidate on how you can destroy his body.
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Dec 2, 2015 11:43 PM #1420205
In weaknesses you said fire is his bane. Do you mean pain instead? I don't know what is bane.
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Dec 3, 2015 12:10 AM #1420215
I like "it's" design, very cool. But could you elaborate on how much strength "it" has? Maybe give example of max force/weight it can influence? Also, like others have said, please define how "destroy entire body" is a weakness, seems like almost a strength to me. Anyways, awesome intro, really liked it.
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Dec 3, 2015 12:32 AM #1420223
Quote from Draou
I like "it's" design, very cool. But could you elaborate on how much strength "it" has? Maybe give example of max force/weight it can influence? Also, like others have said, please define how "destroy entire body" is a weakness, seems like almost a strength to me. Anyways, awesome intro, really liked it.


Huh. Oh yeah. Never thought about it that way, how destroy entire body can be a strength.
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Dec 3, 2015 6:37 AM #1420330
ok what is zombie weakness?
edit: fix the weakness
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Dec 3, 2015 7:12 AM #1420340
Zombie weakenss is dying in one hit when someone casts Cura