yep, all fixed, now please comment or CC on the animation.

wtf happens after the stick shoots the beam? it's all like zooming somewhere else. lol

Wow, you've really improved on the teleportation skills; I like it.
The beam didn't seem powerful enough, though. Try adding more lines on the outer rims of the beam to make it look darker. That'll help.

Overall t's really great. Very smooth, too.

The beam needs more screen shaking :)

snipe posted this exact animation in the beginners section

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35331&page=235

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snipe posted this exact animation in the beginners section

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=35331&page=235

I am snipe,


@cherry, thanks, I'm working on a better beam form.

@puinkey, I'm bad at doing shaking effects sometimes, but will do.

@ the ownwer, IT'S MAGIC.

very very nice beatifull

I liked 'em. I dont see much to crit on
I'm not an easytooner, so my comments might not be the best :/

Don't forget not to just work on effects but also work on the animations itself such as moving and types of action of the stick figure as well. But your effects are nicely done.

i came after watching the teleport thing

LOL, I didn't know you were snipe....lol

Saw it in the begginners section, love the tele.
But I say not enough particles in the beam.

the beam seemed kinda weak but the teleport thing when he was wrapped up that was awesome

I agree a bit with G. Though, the whole animation was pretty good. The only thing thats stupid is that the beam is too small. The bloody beam looks like water going through a tube then splashing. Try to do bigger and more chaotic destructive beams. Make it have the feeling as if the whole earth is shaking.

Tremor is the piece of the beams
Feel the beam. Animate the beam
Try to make the beam more bigger and add more effects

Read date, I'm a bit more improved with beams now.