ScatterFace vs Seagull

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Dec 3, 2015 8:46 PM #1420599
(Start Nov, 6th End: Dec, 3rd)

ScatterFace (Wither): http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/6310/

Seagull (Beats): http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/6303/
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Dec 4, 2015 12:25 AM #1420631
I vote for Seagull. His was just overall better.
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Dec 4, 2015 1:10 AM #1420641
Scatterface your style has a lot of potential if you polish it. Your angles are very interesting, but it's too sloppily done right now. Your figures also move a bit too slowly which makes the movements less smooth.

Seagull - I would say work on the sword swinging. The way your character swings his sword makes it look like the sword has no weight

Ya both need sound effects
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Dec 4, 2015 2:14 AM #1420658
Quote from Escarioth
Scatterface your style has a lot of potential if you polish it. Your angles are very interesting, but it's too sloppily done right now. Your figures also move a bit too slowly which makes the movements less smooth.

Seagull - I would say work on the sword swinging. The way your character swings his sword makes it look like the sword has no weight

Ya both need sound effects


Yeah, i definitely need some work on my sword fight animating. I'm watching that greatest swordsman collab a lot as reference lol.
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Dec 4, 2015 3:25 AM #1420667
Could you get a youtube link up possibly?
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Dec 4, 2015 5:57 AM #1420691
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Could you get a youtube link up possibly?


Yes please, that would be nice. So I could watch at my own pace.
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Dec 4, 2015 12:06 PM #1420724
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Could you get a youtube link up possibly?


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4OW_PQ0ZbUU&feature=youtube_gdata_player it's also in higher quality.
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Dec 4, 2015 12:23 PM #1420728
scatterface, I can see you did your best
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Dec 4, 2015 3:01 PM #1420750
ScatterFace, your angles is good, but the rest of the anim just get sloppy. Seagull, I like the way you animate, considered that it has a fun storyboard, better anim, smooth easing.

My vote goes Seagull.