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Aug 5, 2008 8:50 AM #209759
I haven't used easytoon in a while, but my computer's acting up and flash won't start, so I thought I would give it a shot


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http://img521.imageshack.us/img521/6006/smokeca3.gif

It's a bit faster than I had imagined, now that I see it with firefox, but you get the point
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Aug 5, 2008 9:15 AM #209772
wow, you just love doing smoke with that style.


it's good but it feel like..it's not puffy, as in, the texture of it does not fit smoke.

Edit, no that's actually sick.
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Aug 5, 2008 10:24 AM #209814
There should be a frame between the smoke being small and being big. It suddenly becomes big with no anticipation at all.

Otherwise, nice smoke.
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Aug 5, 2008 4:19 PM #210026
it actually looks a little like flash, because thats the first smoke/explosion i have seen in easytoons that is all black. I like it though.
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Aug 5, 2008 4:21 PM #210030
woah!!! thats sexeh
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Aug 5, 2008 6:19 PM #210151
Quote from Raffi
There should be a frame between the smoke being small and being big. It suddenly becomes big with no anticipation at all.

Otherwise, nice smoke.

Yeah, I had one there before but the way I drew it the animation looked wierd, so I deleted it. I know what you mean though.
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Aug 5, 2008 6:48 PM #210192
It's really crazy; it's of the comical sort but still like a cartoon. I like it.

The only thing two things I can say are weird is that the massive cloud comes out of nowhere and how the gas rises. Maybe you can have the gas look like it's dissipating and spreading as it rises instead of looking like it shrinks.
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Aug 5, 2008 10:45 PM #210482
I'm not so good at the whole dissapating and spreading bit.
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