Jade (Camila) vs Gildedguy [NO POLL - CnC Please :D]

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Dec 7, 2015 2:45 AM #1421384
Camilla:
+Dem effects
+I like how the BG came into play with the fight
+ Smooth af animation but some movements don't seem quite right like when Jade lands after being in midair or when she shoots fire balls from here fans,etc. Something is just a bit off with some of the movements, perhaps it's the poses. It just maybe needs to be exaggerated more.
+ Awesome choice of music
- To be honest, background art is a bit bland compared to gildedguy's
- Art style of this animation seems to be generic, it's your average stickman animation while gildedguy's is a cartoony fullbody-ish animation to which I'm more in favour with.


Gildedguy:
+Animation is smoother
+Stylish as fuck, I love the cartoony style it by itself outclassed Camilla's animation(as awesome as her animation still is)
+Comedic
+Cute
+The angles though
+Dem effects
+The music is pretty fitting
- No sound effects( I would like better it when there's sound effects but that's just me)




Both animations are nonetheless awesome!
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Dec 7, 2015 1:28 PM #1421509
I'd just like to say that imo, asking for sound effects in an animation that's synched up nicely to the music is not knowing what you're talking about.
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Dec 7, 2015 1:50 PM #1421515
i think gildedguy is my new favorite animator...
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Dec 7, 2015 5:22 PM #1421543
If i had to pick, i would choose glidedguy, even tho i dont know anything about him ._. sowy camila ;3
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Dec 7, 2015 5:44 PM #1421545
Thabks for all the CnC guys, and guys if you read the frontpage we just wanted CnC as to see what we can make better a next time. I don't need you guys to tell me "which one is better" I know that perfectly. But we both decided at the begginig that this would be only to grow as animators and make something fun out of it. I know that if it was a competitive battle I would of got rekt xD but that's not the point of this.

I thank smile and arch a lot for the CnC since I can clearly see some flaws I can definitely improove them in the future. I'm glad that you guys liked what I did .3. ♥
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Dec 7, 2015 10:08 PM #1421588
Hola, awesome animation both of you! Yeah like cam said this just for CnC thing so okay i want to give my opinion with your animation.
For Cam
+Good animation
+Smooth
+Sync Sound Effect
+Nice angle, do it more later!
- The effect is not consistent, sometime good sometime not good like before
- Some art thing like BG need to be improved

Gildedguy
+Awesome style
+Smooth
+Very Much Angle
+Full Body Animms
+Nice Art (BG and other arty thing)
+Longer than Camila has
- No Sound Effect
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Dec 8, 2015 1:01 AM #1421619
I've watched Gildedguy's entry too much actually. Its awesome with the atmosphere, music synergy and action.
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Dec 8, 2015 1:47 AM #1421626
For the people saying that "No sound effect" is a minus for Gildedguy's part:

SFX =/= Better Output
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Dec 8, 2015 1:51 AM #1421627
Quote from Zero
For the people saying that "No sound effect" is a minus for Gildedguy's part:

SFX =/= Better Output


What? The sound effects was the music synchro itself.
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Dec 8, 2015 1:56 AM #1421628
ikr

I'd just like to reiterate:
Quote from Smile
I'd just like to say that imo, asking for sound effects in an animation that's synched up nicely to the music is not knowing what you're talking about.
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Dec 8, 2015 2:33 AM #1421641
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What? The sound effects was the music synchro itself.

That's BGM syncing.

I'm saying SFX.
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Dec 8, 2015 2:36 AM #1421642
And I'm saying that the BGM syncing filled up that void that the missing SFX did, that it was okay without SFX.
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Dec 8, 2015 2:38 AM #1421644
Quote from ErrorBlender
And I'm saying that the BGM syncing filled up that void that the missing SFX did, that it was okay without SFX.

What are you even saying?

Why are you telling me this? I already know this. I said "For the people saying that "No sound effect" is a minus".
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Dec 8, 2015 2:39 AM #1421646
Sorry. I'll keep quiet now. Was just trying to add to your point.
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Dec 8, 2015 2:42 AM #1421647
Quote from ErrorBlender
Sorry. I'll keep quiet now. Was just trying to add to your point.

I get what you were trying to say, that the BGM becomes an SFX because of its timing but you should also know what I was trying to say too.