Lets just kill it Michelle said, holding the hilt of her sword prepared to strike at any moment.

Vents watched Xiu leave.

Vents: Aw you leaving already? Come on, your gonna miss the fight!

Adam looked over at Michelle, "I like the way you think!" He said smiling devilishly.
"You go for the mule, if you can, use it as a footstool to leap onto the ogre's back!"

He brought Demon-Slayer down to its regular fighting position. "I'll take him from the front..."

((Btw Jared, if you read Devour's post a few pages back, try to elaborate and make your posts just a bit longer than a few sentences. Look at my posts, they're not too long, or too short... Just a friendly reminder...))

Grace was slightly disappointed that she no longer had Vents attention. However she quickly got over it. She sighed and watched the boy. He's so cute when he's excited.

Michelle proceeded towards the footstool, and used it to leap to the Ogres back.She then unsheathe her sword and attempted to stab the ogres back hoping it would break its spine and instantly kill it.

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((Arch-Angel, not trying to be rude. TLS may not be the best host for the RP, and he's (probably) fine with you giving him advice, but you can't just interrupt the RP and narrate it for him... :/))

I know I've already jumped in and made this a mess for everyone but seriously this time, listen to Archie and Devour, they know what they're talking about. Simply running your posts through spell and grammar checkers can have a significant effect. If everyone is thinking through their posts thoroughly and actually considering exactly what their character would do in a certain situation, then the RP becomes a significantly more immersive and enjoyable experience for everyone. I mention the latter speficically because the biggest hurdle for new RPers is often seperating their character from themselves. For example, SpacePunk's character is a lesbian alien bartender. Arch's character is basically Han Solo because he's original. These two are waiting on Xylatran New Year at an orbital franchise of Mos Eisley or W/e. Flea Market Han Solo uses the new year kiss bullshit to try to swoon SpacePunk's character, the character tells him to back off goes to attend another customer despite SpacePunk herself desperately wanting to take Arch to the space motel. Their selves and characters are completely separate. Run your new characters through some Mary Sue detectors and read up on what a Mary Sue is, everyone. Having one can be painful to watch, a handful is a serious pain in the dick. Good luck and have fun with your roleplay

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I know I've already jumped in and made this a mess for everyone but seriously this time, listen to Archie and Devour, they know what they're talking about. Simply running your posts through spell and grammar checkers can have a significant effect. If everyone is thinking through their posts thoroughly and actually considering exactly what their character would do in a certain situation, then the RP becomes a significantly more immersive and enjoyable experience for everyone. I mention the latter speficically because the biggest hurdle for new RPers is often seperating their character from themselves. For example, SpacePunk's character is a lesbian alien bartender. Arch's character is basically Han Solo because he's original. These two are waiting on Xylatran New Year at an orbital franchise of Mos Eisley or W/e. Flea Market Han Solo uses the new year kiss bullshit to try to swoon SpacePunk's character, the character tells him to back off goes to attend another customer despite SpacePunk herself desperately wanting to take Arch to the space motel. Their selves and characters are completely separate. Run your new characters through some Mary Sue detectors and read up on what a Mary Sue is, everyone. Having one can be painful to watch, a handful is a serious pain in the dick. Good luck and have fun with your roleplay

{{What...what the hell are you talking about.}}

Xiu stopped and turned around holding the black cat in her arms, surprised Vents called out to her. Trying to emulate Grace, she folded her arms completely and scoffed.
"I guess I could stay for your fight...if it...uhhh...isn't boring or anything."

Wow, nice try.

Angrily but still smiling, Xiu tightened her arms further strangling the cat a bit.

Xiu, Please!

((I am not disagreeing with you Damian, I've been trying to keep my grammar and the length of my posts on point. I do read your guys posts, and I recognize you're trying to help. So thanks for doing that. :) ))

He saw an ogre, crossing the road in front of Adam and Michelle, the Warrior yelled something to him, but he couldn't hear what, he was too far.

He didn't yet knew the intentions of the creature, but he didn't care much at the moment...He just wanted to kill something...

As this thought went through his head, his eye turned bright white, and moment later, a giant marble spear was in his palm, and his body was already in the position to throw, like a professional athlete.

Second later, he hurled the weapon aiming for beast's heart, with at least just as much force, as he used when he punched the tree, minutes ago.

((I try to keep my posts at decent quality [Which sometimes proves to be hard, since English is not my primary language...], and length, but sometimes there's just nothing more to write about. + I do agree that for quite a while this RP was a giant Spamfiesta full of confusion, and that's...that's not a good thing...))

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{{What...what the hell are you talking about.}}

((Roleplay? I'm sure you know what I'm talking Org. Or no? ))

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((Roleplay? I'm sure you know what I'm talking Org. Or no? ))

((I think he's questioning the stories behind you and Arch's characters... XD ))

Grace chuckled at Xiu's attempt to be like her. It was cute. She was cute. Grace got up and walked over to her, wrapping her arms around her waist and whispered in her ear seductivly. "Or we could go into the woods and have some...alone time." She smirked.

(( I'm not. I haven't read up on the Org's character but I'm sure it's fine. Arch doesn't even have a character in this. ))

*Para turns his attention to a nearby tree.

Para: well, since everybody is doing whatever, I'll just go to that tree over there and try out my new weapon.

*Para walks to the tree of his choice, passing by Grace and Xiu along the way, and he unsheathed his sword.

Vents watched Grace grab Xiu around the hips and whisper in her ear. It amused him. He laughed and flipped off the ground, landing on his feet and spun around the forest.

Vents: Come on "Rovi" I'm ready for a sparring match, this should be fun.

Vents didn't watch where he was going and slammed into a tree.

Vents: I'm ok, I'm ok.

It seemed that Vents was starting to get used to the group. Showing his true, silly nature.