The year is 3012, a secret branch of the American government has conducted experiments to create a powerful army, the branch's name is "the Dominate branch" and not even the president knows about them. Their reasons for this were pure evil, simply just to triumph over the other countries, eventually planning to control the world. They conducted the experiments on orphans, thinking the world would not miss them if the experiments were to prove fatal. The experiments went from creating androids, technologically enhanced body parts, cyborgs, to even turning people into hive minds. There were 9 recorded kids that were kidnapped and experimented on. There were only 3 that survived, the other 6 were tossed into a junk yard without a second thought. They were assumed to be dead, but this was not the case...
The "failed" are awake and they want revenge. They've given themselves a mission, to find the facility producing these now completed projects. The problem is that the first generation of the completed are now stronger than they were before with newfound enhancements. Will the "failed" be able to over throw the facility, or will the completed destroyed the rejected soldiers?

Enhancements
Your enhancements should be based of something that could only be given to you through technology. So stuff like magic and anything related to fantasy will not be excepted. But if there is a power you really want make sure you have good way of backing it up. Don't just say "He can control fire because of some technical in him." That will not be accepted.


~Enemies~
There will be 3 different types of enemies you will be fighting.
Soldiers: Regular soldiers, nothing special about them. Except the usually come in teams of around 50.
Robots: Usually ten robots per team. They will be equipped with guns, shields, and electric swords.
Mechs: Giant robots only 1 will attack you and has a soldier inside. Equipped with mini guns and giant combat knives.
The other team: Of course you have the other team to worry about. They will be trying to kill you.

~Goals~
The "Failed": You are currently in Washington, DC. Your memory has been wiped clean of where exactly the Facility is located. You must first infiltrate the Capital (The building, not the state.) and find the information you want. After that get to the Facility and stop the operation.

The Completed: Your job is simple, kill the "failed" before they get to the facility.

~Combat rules~
Combat will be determined through your character's enhancements. Their I will be registering their strength, speed, and strategic ability. I'll also be putting in account of what makes sense. If your fighting a character with magnetic enhancements and you have a metal arm, then I'm pretty sure you know who would be victorious in that fight. Any damages that were inflicted on you will of course be carried with you until I decided they healed or if they are on your enhancements, I will be sure to have specialized mechanics throughout the RP.

~Rules~
-No godmodding
-Fights, romance, and cussing are allowed
-No killing without my say so
-Auto hits will be turned on to a certain point. (Examples are somewhere down there.)
-No sexual stuff

If you break these rules, I'll be sure your character dies a horrible, embarrassing death. :^D

If you agree with these please enter "Hot Doggy-Dog" Under your characters picture.

~Notes~
-Your character must be somewhere around 15 - 19 as the were kids when they were abducted.
-Your character must be an orphan, how they became one doesn't matter.
-If you happen to become inactive your character will be following us around quietly or PM me if you would like me to take control of your character.
-If you need to leave and know you won't be back just PM me and they will die an honorable death, don't worry we will recruit someone else.
-The completed are meant to be a little OP compared to ONE "failed" as there are only 3.

~Auto hit~
Only minor attacks will be auto hits. (I.e: Person 1 punches person 2 in the face.)
I will be judging major and possibly deadly attacks. (I.e: Person 1 launches a death beam at person 2.)

ME!!
I will of course keep the RP ready and flowing when I can.
I will be portraying the Administrator, sending the Completed out on missions that I believe they can complete based of of their Enhancements.
I will also be the mechanics placed all throughout the RP, providing upgrades and fixing any damages done to your enhancements.

~Just stuff I've seen that bothers me.~
-If you see my character suggest something, don't immediately think that's what I want and agree with it. I'm just RPing, feel free to have your character put up an argument.
- Don't make yourself the center of attention, this will make me want to kill your character off faster.
- And please don't think I am giving myself special properties because I organised this, I promise I will follow the rules too.
-I really do want everyone's characters to live at the end of this but be smart, if you put yourself in a fight that your character won't be able to leave alive, don't engage, run. Fighting is not the mission of the "Failed", just the completed.
-MOST IMPORTANT: IDC what relationship you have with mine or anyone else's character's, if you put yourself in a "dumb fight" you will die. CASE CLOSED!



Sorry for the massive pictures, but I really liked them.


"Failed" Projects:
1. Eric Hans
2. Evelyn Calaway
3. Richard Blake
4. Dante Caragher
5. Alex Hatfield
6. Grant Senan

Completed projects:
1. Elma Adema
2. Riley Sanders
3. Ashley Devor
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CS

Name: Eric Hans

Age: 16

S.O: Straight

Experiment number: 1

Project Status: Failed

Nickname: Burn

Gender: Male

Type: Cyborg

Enhancement: Eric has been experimented on heavily, being repeatedly killed and and shocked back to life, torn apart and put back together. He ended up with robotic arms covered in synthetic skin and a glowing green orb of energy, placed carefully in his heart. These made him able to able to disperse high amounts of colored energy. Each color serves a different purpose.
Yellow - Pierces through objects
Blue - Explosion produced from his energy is increased
Red - Overall size of laser is increased
White - combines with objects when launched, creating a railgun effect.

Weapon: Eric carries around a simple staff, no bigger than a ruler, that corresponds with his powers.
red - length of staff is increased
Blue - Impact of staff is increased
yellow - slashes through enemies as if it were a sword


Bio: Eric was the first to become kidnapped and experimented on. He was strong, strong enough to be considered a completed... If he wasn't such a dick. After causing numerous fights with the scientist and killing an important member of the Dominate Branch, The Facility decided to kill him (or rather, tried) and trash him. He had awoken a few months later surrounded by people like him. He visited the junkyard everyday, watching as the others awoke and left and some who had still not waken up.

Personality: Eric may seem like an asshole at first glance, and second, and maybe even third. But deep down He is actually a very caring person, he will on numerous occasions jump in to a fight that he has no business being in just so a friend does not need to. He would never admit it but he actually gets attached to people very quickly and loves making friend. Though his short temper and harsh attitude often steer people the wrong way.

Reason for being "Thrown Away": Started fights with scientist, killing a member of the Dominate Branch, sometimes let off random bursts of energy.

Extra: Thanks to the constants experiments, when under extreme amounts of stress Eric begins to go into a psychotic phase. Which he attacks anything he sees as a threat towards him. He cares little about remorse, pity or mercy, he'll kill without so much as a second thought.

Due to the streams of heated energy when using his powers, his finger nails are black as a result.

Too. Many. RP's.

So... What's the RP goal?

Veir's: overthrow shit
Devour's: find shit
Yours: ____ shit

Not only that, your RP is bare bone, with the auto hits->insta kills if tr players play their cards right (weak punch... That pushes you off a cliff)

I like the premise and to be honest I kind of already have a character in mind for this.

However, as it stands this seems a bit barebones, especially since this seems like a PVP thing? The rules need to be more extensive, else its your just going to be winging it.

Consider:

• Character Creation - What are the parameters and the limitations: so far the only limitations are that they are an orphan, are these character's supposed to have realistic or scientific powers? What about psychic or magical powers? Where is the template for Failed and Completed projects? What's the difference between the two.
  
• Overall Plot - What are the failed trying to accomplish? What about the Completed? Or "The Government? What's the overall plotline? Do you have a framework of what's going to happen? If you try to wing this thing, you're gonna burn out fast and the RP won't have a ghost of a chance. The very fact that you suggested that you can simply pass it on to someone else does not bode well at all. That being said many good RP's don't have planned plots but they make up by heavily developing their setting, objectives, etc...Which you have yet to do.
  
• Setting and Locations - Where is everyone located? Describe the junkyard or use pictures if you can.
  
• The group of scientists - Just "The Government" isn't really descriptive, is it the entire government? A splinter cell, a shadow organization?
  
• Combat - How does combat work? Do characters have stats and if they do, is that a parameter in character creation? How will damage be determined? What are the limitations of attack?
  
• None Combat - What do character's do when not fighting? How can they interact?
  

For a good RP, you don't have to answer all of these, but you should be considering it. As it stands, this is barely a forum game let alone an RP.

I should've added this is still in the works, I just wanted to put the main idea down before I forgot.

If it's still in the works then why didn't you just put it on a word document or something so you could work on it more instead of wasting our time with something thats not even fucking done. Put some more effort into things before you throw them out ffs, or ask someone to review it with you. Just ask some of the guys above me, they're interested in it and would love helping you.

Quote from Mode

I should've added this is still in the works, I just wanted to put the main idea down before I forgot.

Better yet, go to General Forum
0. Open notepad
1. Press Post New Thread
2. Put your ideas down with some formatting
3. Press Preview Post
4. Repeat till ready to stop
5. Copy the whole post, including all its bbcode and save it into a text file, don't save it into a word file, as it will mess somethings up
6. Save and exit
7. When ready to make RP, Post the thread

Quote from Arch-Angel

Too. Many. RP's.

Couldn't agree more. Also for some reason, this reminds me of Kingdom Rush.

Ok! I've put everything I planned, I'm now accepting people.

use spoiler tags

[Completed]

Name: Elma Adema
Age: 18
Gender: Female
S.O (Optional): Asexual
Experiment number: 7
Project Status: Completed
Nickname (Has to do with your enhancement.): FeyFire (All one word, like Starfire)
Type (Technologically enhanced, Cyborg, ETC,) : Psychic
Personality: Extremely Loyal, Methodical, Unsympathetic and Unemphatic, thus she can't understand those that betray Dominate. Her only positive trait is that she can be compassionate, but she typically feigns other emotions such as anger or sadness when it can be used strategically.

Bio: Elma had natural psychic powers, but was never interested in using them. When her parents died after a failed experiment got loose she volunteered. Unbeknownst to her, her parents were actually killed by Dominate so that she could become an experiment. That being said she does not hate the fallen but she sees them as dangerous elements that need to be destroyed. Her younger brother, Hans, survived but due the circumstances of their arrangement, she had to abandon him in return for him being provided for and not living like an Orphan. Although, he doesn't talk to her, she cares for him deeply. He happens to live in DC as well.

Reason for being “Kept”: Ridiculous combat potential.

Enhancement: Elma's psychic powers are extremely strange. She can induce audiovisual hallucinations through eye contact. Wields a single edged katana called Adelheid that she is very proficient with. It is much sharper than an ordinary Katana using psychic force to increase its power and it channels electricity that disables any electronic device it comes in contact with. She also wields powerful psychic flames that are not hot but cause intense mental damage, that have intense force behind them, and aren't affected by wind or water. Wrapping the flames around herself can create a shield and she can also fire it from her hands as well. She can even use it as a force of propulsion if she fires fast enough.

Although Elma's powers do not cause her to tire out, she cannot use them when extremely fatigued. If kept awake via drugs or otherwise, she will begin to have hallucinations which prevents her from sleeping as well.

Extra: Elma's sword is actually a composite of her psychic energy. Since it is tethered to her mind, it can be used against her, but it also cannot be used by anyone else or broken traditionally.

Subs:
Hans - Elma's younger brother. While he appears quiet and aloof, he is very popular and is shown to have a gentle and heroic side. He lives alone in his apartment, but his friends are always hanging around him. He is a very good cook, a prodigy kendoist, and a skilled drummer.
Kels (Kelsey) - Hans's friend and self proclaimed girlfriend. She is quiet clumsy and gullible, but has a heart of gold and a maternal personality. In her family, she is the middle child. Although she isn't good with her hands, or with cooking, she is a talented singer. She also has some feelings for Bryan as well.
Bryan - Han's best friend. He is the son of a police chief and an aspiring comedian. He is also quite the prankster to Kelsey's dismay. He has twin younger sister's who he's quite protective of and is extremely competitive. He's also a guitarist.

Appearance:
5" 6'
Pale white skin, Pink eyes, and chin length black hair. She unintentionally generates Pink psychic flames around her as these signify her repressed emotions.

Quote from The Organization

some application for the RP

Are you seriously gonna go for playing on 3 RPs?

Quote from Ipman

Are you seriously gonna go for playing on 3 RPs?

I registered for Dev's while in Veir's and TLS's

Besides I was going to post my own RP and play in it anyway. Compared to GMing, RPing is a piece of cake.

But like I told Dev, this character is reserve, I just enjoy making characters

Accepted.

Welp...since i managed to miss both previous RPs that are going on right now, while the 3rd one got binned, and Veir is way too intimidating for me, to ask him about joining his >_>, im starving for any of that RP action...


Name:Evelyn Calaway

Age: 17

Gender: Female

S.O: Bisexual (Cuz why not)

Experiment number: 5

Project Status: Failed

Nickname: Crimson

Type: Bio-Technologically Enhanced, Implants.

Personality: Evelyn is just a happy, innocent and awkward being that tries to make her way through the struggles of life. She is kind, caring and friendly, but naive. She's really exuberant, and energetic, capable of going from zero to hundred, in a matter of seconds, over-reacting over even the smallest of things. She easily gets frustrated, and often doesn't really act up to her age. Eve was born with a talent to make things... "harder than they should be", thanks to her clumsiness, and awkwardness, she often says things that shouldn't be said, and does things that shouldn't been done. She is also very inquisitive and talkative, but easily gets distracted, often forgets about certain things, or just starts daydreaming, almost completely quitting the reality. Although, there are rare moments, when she gets quiet and serious, it is usually when something bad happens to her friends, or people that didn't deserved it. But even considering her, sometimes "loud", chaotic personality, she's kind of a person that is just really hard not to like, making other's life just a little bit more interesting.

Appearance: Not too tall, with thin body build. Blonde, long hair, that would go all the way to her waist, but because of the hood, they go down both her shoulders, and end up around the height of her belly button. She has red-brownish, tired eyes, with dark circles under them. Her pale face is always hidden under a hood of her blue, thick hoodie, with soft fur inside, and with thin, black, horizontal strips on its outside, without a zipper, that is probably one or two sizes too big for her. She also wears short, black trousers, black sneakers, and golden watch on her right wrist, that doesn't work for quite some time already.




Bio: She doesn't remember her parents, and lived on the streets since she remembers, often getting help from random people - better or worse kind. She would sleep in abandoned buildings, and eat what she managed to steal from smaller shops - Which with top notch "Security of The Future" was quite an achievement. When she was much younger, she stumbled upon one of these "Worse" people, a member of "Dominate". Eve followed him, lead by her curiosity and naivety. Then, everything she remembered were bright lights, pain, and coldness. Yet, another day, she simply woke up on a trash pile, sick and battered...And her life went on from there, almost as it was before...well, maybe except some new useful traits, and some less pleasant ailment...

Reason for being “Thrown away”: Unknown sickness, that was caused by replacing her heart with an artificial one, that was made out of newly discovered, metal alloy, that was supposed to produce her modified blood, and connecting that heart to her brain with additional technology, and implants, that is source of her "power".

Enhancement: Her blood is in fact, a fluid metal, that she is able to control, and quickly produce. Her artificial heart, changed the "composition" of her blood-cells, and is able to produce them much faster. Various implants, basing mostly on magnetism, let her control it. She can also change the state of matter of her blood, by compressing it, on its molecular level (I guess? Not a scientist), starting from gas, through its normal fluid state, ending on a steel-like hard solid state.

Examples of use:
Gas- Smokescreens, can be used to suffocate someone, creating pressure in tight areas.
Fluid- Mostly used to determine the shape of an object, before it is turned into solid form, it's slippery in bigger amounts, can be used to connect two objects to each other.
Solid- Creating objects, weapons and barriers. If used with gas "form", Eve's able to create powerful firearms and explosives (Guns, grenades), powered by the pressure of blood changing into gas, inside the solid object.

Although she can control only her "modified" blood, it is contagious. Once her blood gets into a contact with someone else's blood, Eve's blood cells are acting like a virus, slowly "hijacking and taking over" those blood cells, eventually letting her control them as well. But, if Evelyn isn't next to the infected for some time, sooner or later, this blood will come back to normal.

Evelyn's body regenerates much faster, and because she has so much metal inside her, it's also more durable. Mentioned before, her blood cells are produced with insane speed, this grill ain't goin to bleed out by herself.

Even though, the sickness stigmatized her, she's still able to move fast and act quickly, but only for short amount of time, before she starts to experience intense pain.

Extra: Mentioned (Prob. way too many times) before, she's sick. She'll often cough, sometimes spitting some blood, and she's slightly limping on her left leg.

During prolonged physical activities, she might suddenly get weak, or even faint.




Dont have a picture here...so...Hot Dawgy-Dawg i guess?