Salty Sketches

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Jan 17, 2016 12:02 PM #1431120
All my animation sketches go here:

A little something I started working on

https://45.media.tumblr.com/df26e5e16df1a3b10bb49a2e05343442/tumblr_o0mrznVy9u1v1kez7o1_1280.gif

Sketch 3

https://49.media.tumblr.com/481436aec2d573d28ec6751d6daff716/tumblr_o0iutl3RIw1v1kez7o1_1280.gif

Sketch 2

https://49.media.tumblr.com/11759d6d15bbfadd8afc3a2518b322f9/tumblr_o0hc5oP5u31v1kez7o1_1280.gif

Sketch Test 1

http://salt.hyunsdojo.com/showcase/f4816e1aa32b91bf_63331507/
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Jan 17, 2016 12:47 PM #1431127
You've got the forms right but your movements definitely need more work.

Adding more frames for "A little something" and "Sketch Test 1" would do wonders. "Sketch 2" lacks 'umph' and the "charging" motion needs to have more frames. Sketch 3 is decent but it's too short for me to actually like it.