
I need serious C&C.

Quote from grubberWhy is the Apple and Orange blurry?
The gun barely looks like a gun, it needs more components.
Leik teh Strawberry.
Fire is decent, needs more flame.
Quote from dvdhaxorDamn! Crayons! Let's eat'em
Quote from Bpanther13these are... well, you need to start off shading simpler stuff like just plain balls and cubes; very simple stuff. the gun barely looks like one... don't draw those untill you can shade a rectangular prism correctly. ALSO, when you practice shading, draw a lightbulb somewhere on the page so you can refer to it when you need to know which direction the light is coming from. hope that wasn't a waste of my time.
Quote from ManthaThe thing that you draw softly is your advantage. Now you have to learn how to make a bit stronger lines for the shade, to add contrast.
The apple is messed up. And the fire too. Gun could be better.
Also, trying to draw without a reference won't make you any better, unless you're inventing new characters or something. You have to know and learn about how things look if you want to make an image of them on the paper.
I like the orange and the strawberry. Keep working, you're on a good way.