Post-it Sketches.

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Aug 6, 2008 12:53 AM #210697
Some sketches on a post-it note. I have nothing better to draw on.
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I need serious C&C.
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Aug 6, 2008 12:56 AM #210702
Why is the Apple and Orange blurry?
The gun barely looks like a gun, it needs more components.
Leik teh Strawberry.
Fire is decent, needs more flame.
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Aug 6, 2008 1:00 AM #210704
Quote from grubber
Why is the Apple and Orange blurry?
The gun barely looks like a gun, it needs more components.
Leik teh Strawberry.
Fire is decent, needs more flame.


I think it's just my drawing style, lol. I'm really sloppy. I agree with you on the gun, I tried to draw it without a reference.

Thanks.
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Aug 6, 2008 2:16 AM #210768
More details. Cant CC to much on stuff this sketchy.
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Aug 6, 2008 2:42 AM #210809
Yeah, I don't want to try anything bigger because I think I'll fuck it up, but I'll try to get some better stuff in later.
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Aug 6, 2008 11:00 AM #211129
Damn! Crayons! Let's eat'em
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Aug 6, 2008 11:03 AM #211133
its nice, but im not much for scetches...
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Aug 6, 2008 4:21 PM #211318
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Damn! Crayons! Let's eat'em


This was actually with a pencil. I draw softly.
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Aug 7, 2008 10:08 AM #212142
Crap, can't eat pencils, the tips tare apart my mouth!
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Aug 7, 2008 4:34 PM #212346
these are... well, you need to start off shading simpler stuff like just plain balls and cubes; very simple stuff. the gun barely looks like one... don't draw those untill you can shade a rectangular prism correctly. ALSO, when you practice shading, draw a lightbulb somewhere on the page so you can refer to it when you need to know which direction the light is coming from. hope that wasn't a waste of my time.
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Aug 7, 2008 5:11 PM #212366
The thing that you draw softly is your advantage. Now you have to learn how to make a bit stronger lines for the shade, to add contrast.

The apple is messed up. And the fire too. Gun could be better.

Also, trying to draw without a reference won't make you any better, unless you're inventing new characters or something. You have to know and learn about how things look if you want to make an image of them on the paper.

I like the orange and the strawberry. Keep working, you're on a good way.
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Aug 7, 2008 6:32 PM #212415
Quote from Bpanther13
these are... well, you need to start off shading simpler stuff like just plain balls and cubes; very simple stuff. the gun barely looks like one... don't draw those untill you can shade a rectangular prism correctly. ALSO, when you practice shading, draw a lightbulb somewhere on the page so you can refer to it when you need to know which direction the light is coming from. hope that wasn't a waste of my time.


Yeah, I suck at guns. I've known that exercise for a while now. It was indeed a waste of your time.

Quote from Mantha
The thing that you draw softly is your advantage. Now you have to learn how to make a bit stronger lines for the shade, to add contrast.

The apple is messed up. And the fire too. Gun could be better.

Also, trying to draw without a reference won't make you any better, unless you're inventing new characters or something. You have to know and learn about how things look if you want to make an image of them on the paper.

I like the orange and the strawberry. Keep working, you're on a good way.


I'll try to work on making a better contrast for shading. Thanks.