Okay, so yes....I just created my current wRHG. I know. And I'm going to stick with him for a while...

Still, this idea just sorta slammed into me the other night after a rather hap-hazard and bizarre train of thought.

And I thought that it was wonderful.

So, I wrote it up.

And now I would like for someone, ANYONE to give me feedback on it.

If you like it, I will be eventually using this as my wRHG, just not immediately.

Behold:

Linky here: Hollowell


Give me all the CnC you've got....PLEASE....(okay...I'm not THAT desperate, but you get the idea).

Somehow I feel he's overpowered, but considering he's the "Agent of Prefection" it works well with the character. Other than that, great job. *thumbs up*

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Somehow I feel he's overpowered, but considering he's the "Agent of Prefection" it works well with the character. Other than that, great job. *thumbs up*

Well, one of the principles behind this character is that he is not designed to actually give a fight...thus his unusually great powers. Much like the character Handyman (which I love), this character is designed for a purpose, and as such needs to meet certain qualifications. Essentially, for the first two rounds you are fighting your mind (Round Theme challenge), your weaknesses, or your strengths (via The Nemesis). Only in the third round do you fight him, and even then he is pretty easy to beat. Also, he won't kill you even if you lose...give you a serious "shaking-up" but not kill you.

Thanks for your opinion, though. In light of that, I might go back in a tweak it some to help level things out...