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Pitch, The Moldable Murderer

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Feb 13, 2016 4:54 AM #1437314
PITCH
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ABILITIES
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WEAKNESSES
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STORY
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PERSONALITY
Pitch thinks he's the new God and because of this he is very cocking in battle, he also tends to make fun of his opponent. Outside of battle he still isn't a kind person. He's rude, crude and most likely he will annoy you on purpose. The only way to get on his "Good" side if he thinks you could help him with his plan to take over the world.

APPEARANCE
Pitch is about 6 foot 4 inches tall. He has the shape of a fit, young man who's in his early 20's. He has completely purple skin and no ears or privates to speak of. He always wears a black top hat with a white striped along the bottom.

Here is what his face looks like:
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Feb 13, 2016 10:38 PM #1437446
I'm not sure if it was Omega or something else, but it seems a god complex is now a really common weakness.
I really only have two gripes with the character:
1: "Enhanced Reflexes, Strength, and Speed: He's fast enough to dodge bullets and strong enough to crush cars."
B-b-b-bbloody hell? "The average bullet travels at 2,500 feet per second (around 1,700 mph). If you reacted to the sound of the gun going off and required 0.20 seconds (twice that of the fastest Olympic sprinters) to react, then you would need to be at least 500 feet away to successfully dodge a bullet." -Mythbusters.
So, the average human reaction time is .17 for an audio stimulus. That means you'd need to be 425 feet away to dodge with average reaction. Even then, you'd have to be ridiculously fast and probably expecting it. So, just how fucking fast is bucko here?
And more importantly, if he's that damn fast, him being able to crush a car is extreme for strength. wRHG's who's main tool was strength generally cant do that.

2:"Water: He hates Water. It will also slow him down a considerable amount if enough water is poured on him."
Why?
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Feb 13, 2016 10:47 PM #1437447
I don't have any issues with being super fast or super strong but uh, maybe know your limit. Now I know I lean towards having underdog characters, but if you can skim the wRHG list and destroy most of the characters there, maybe tone it down.

Also, your weaknesses aren't really weaknesses. It's like saying I'm bulletproof and then saying the weakness is that you'll still be a little sore. That's more like a limit on the power, not really a way to beat the character or what would make them easier to beat.
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Feb 14, 2016 2:39 AM #1437461
Quote from Malacal
I'm not sure if it was Omega or something else, but it seems a god complex is now a really common weakness.
I really only have two gripes with the character:
1: "Enhanced Reflexes, Strength, and Speed: He's fast enough to dodge bullets and strong enough to crush cars."
B-b-b-bbloody hell? "The average bullet travels at 2,500 feet per second (around 1,700 mph). If you reacted to the sound of the gun going off and required 0.20 seconds (twice that of the fastest Olympic sprinters) to react, then you would need to be at least 500 feet away to successfully dodge a bullet." -Mythbusters.
So, the average human reaction time is .17 for an audio stimulus. That means you'd need to be 425 feet away to dodge with average reaction. Even then, you'd have to be ridiculously fast and probably expecting it. So, just how fucking fast is bucko here?
And more importantly, if he's that damn fast, him being able to crush a car is extreme for strength. wRHG's who's main tool was strength generally cant do that.

2:"Water: He hates Water. It will also slow him down a considerable amount if enough water is poured on him."
Why?


Response to 1: Sanic Speed

Response to 2: Well my entire thought process on that was "Hey, If you take Pitch out of my name it's just Ender. What does ender stand for??? Enderman, and Endermen hate water. BOOM WEAKNESS!!!!111!!1!"

Also i got his weaknesses from his old RHG page. But I've added a new one!

Also let it be known that Pitch isn't "Human" anymore.
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Feb 14, 2016 5:00 AM #1437471
um, I was more griping about the fact that the character is overpowered in his physical capability.At his speed he could probably destroy every car is a hospital parking lot in mere minutes. Most wRHG's would have to like, actually try.

My problem with the water weakness is that there really isn't a reason for it. Like, it's nice to know how you came up with it, but it doesn't make sense to the character. Like, why does smiley purple guy have a weakness to water that slows him down? Why can't he walk through the river in league? Is he absorbent like a sponge and he gets slowed from the water weight? Does it's dry super fast an because his body is made of something weird it contracts, limiting his movement dramatically?
Like, atleast some logical reason other "Because I said so, kek"
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Feb 14, 2016 6:53 AM #1437487
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Response to 1: Sanic Speed

Response to 2: Well my entire thought process on that was "Hey, If you take Pitch out of my name it's just Ender. What does ender stand for??? Enderman, and Endermen hate water. BOOM WEAKNESS!!!!111!!1!"


Utter brilliance...
Haven't got any major issues with this guy, other than the speed, that's absurd...
Other than that, the strength might need some toning down, but cool character nonetheless!
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Feb 15, 2016 3:01 AM #1437688
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Immunity To Poison: Pitch has an immunity to all poisons that would kill a normal human.


So what you're saying is if it can't kill a normal person, he's not immune to it XD.
(Sorry i had to.)

In all seriousness, just tone down the speed a bit like the others said.
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Feb 15, 2016 5:07 AM #1437725
Wait so this op piece of shit can be another speedy character that doesn't abuse his powers because the creator forgets about it and never makes a proper excuse why, with super strenght at the same time and being super durable AND SUPER SMART and his weakness is his lack of fighting technique and a god complex. He fucking deserves a god complex for how op this man is. Who fucking cares about a fighting technique when all the character with guns can't do jack shit to him.He has 5 abilities and 5 weaknesses and the 5 weaknesses combined can go fuck itself when it only sees the first ability. Like ffs make up your mind on what character you want. You can't have a speedy character with super strenght and durability all while having little to no fucking weaknesses. This is one of the most poorly made wRHG's and I've seen people who are immortal and can move there body if they're decapitated. Please change your first ability and make an actual weakness for this man. He may be killable but you fucking made him a shapeshifter with regen and super speed and strenght and intelligence and thought it was a good idea.
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Feb 15, 2016 1:30 PM #1437787
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So what you're saying is if it can't kill a normal person, he's not immune to it XD.
(Sorry i had to.)

In all seriousness, just tone down the speed a bit like the others said.


Ok I toned down the speed

Also scatter you need to calm down. I'm sure most Rhgs could sneeze a car into space if they wanted to and my character isn't immortal. You're overhyping my characters abilities to make him look like an opiece of shit
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Feb 15, 2016 4:21 PM #1437802
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Ok I toned down the speed

Also scatter you need to calm down. I'm sure most Rhgs could sneeze a car into space if they wanted to and my character isn't immortal. You're overhyping my characters abilities to make him look like an opiece of shit


I agree with him here, seriously dude... CALM DOWN...
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Feb 15, 2016 4:36 PM #1437805
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Ok I toned down the speed

Also scatter you need to calm down. I'm sure most Rhgs could sneeze a car into space if they wanted to and my character isn't immortal. You're overhyping my characters abilities to make him look like an opiece of shit


wRHGs =/= RHGs
They tend to be toned down or focus on one sort of aspect that they are built around instead of being Superman. The most complicated, super strong, or Mary Sue/Gary Stew character are also the hardest to write well for both parties involved.

Character > Capability in wRHG
Capability >= Character in RHG
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Feb 16, 2016 6:04 AM #1437972
People in the RHG make characters to be flashy and cool. wRHG toons are made to tell a better story. There's the key difference.

Also, damn scatter
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Feb 18, 2016 7:36 PM #1438510
"So there is a new being that thinks he's God?" Altaer chuckled and shook his head at the news brought by the messenger of the Great One. "Seems like the Lord of the Abyss needs to cut him down a notch, don't you think?"

With that said, he slid off his bar stool and walked into the men's restroom. He disconnected his links, allowing himself to shift back into the Abyssal Plain. From there, he began his search for this new and impetuous being that called itself Pitch. Within a week he would be able to return to earth, and from there he would make sure that this self-proclaimed god learned his true place, like so many upstarts before him.


{In other words, That's a challenge, PitchEnder!}
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Feb 19, 2016 11:10 AM #1438603
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"So there is a new being that thinks he's God?" Altaer chuckled and shook his head at the news brought by the messenger of the Great One. "Seems like the Lord of the Abyss needs to cut him down a notch, don't you think?"

With that said, he slid off his bar stool and walked into the men's restroom. He disconnected his links, allowing himself to shift back into the Abyssal Plain. From there, he began his search for this new and impetuous being that called itself Pitch. Within a week he would be able to return to earth, and from there he would make sure that this self-proclaimed god learned his true place, like so many upstarts before him.


{In other words, That's a challenge, PitchEnder!}


OOOO I like the way you challenge people, let me think about it since I have some stuff to do.
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Feb 19, 2016 12:36 PM #1438610
O hey, Pitch is back?
Good luck with this character, you've done and improved so much, student.
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