god's for hire chapter 1:a city as pissed as its god(with video intro)

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Apr 7, 2016 10:42 PM #1445167
screams are heard through out a train station as a mysterious warrior wearing a coat chases a monster through a crowd the monster looks like a giant human with a lizard like appearance.it sprints towards the train on two legs as human would while the red coated warrior goes after the lizard monster. the mysterious creature runs full speed through the train station as people jump out of the way the lizard continually runs towards the train that is parked and waiting for passengers the lizard jumps into the air the red coated warrior immediately shouts golden chains of elakrius red chains appear from underground as though they had been there the entire time destroying the ground around them they go fourth to bind the Lizard man who was attempting to jump over the train but falls with a large thud on the train causing a huge dent on the train roof the lizard screams out in rage as the mysterious warrior jumps high into the air and doin a super hero like landing on the train..the warrior begins to speak...I gladius pass judgment upon you Be gone from this plain..or perish Beast:"Roar" the beast resoponds by snapping the chain it was bound in"So be it I will Defend the good people of gladius" yells the warrior as if re-inacting the scene of an anime Loud enough to be heard by the spectators. the lizard gets up and breathes a bluefire but the warrior jumps back as a sword appears in mid air it has the appearance of a normal kitana..only at has a red flame that surrounds it the warrior charges at the monster dodging all its flaming attacks with flips and twists he finally gets close enough and swings his mystic blade slashing not only the monster but the most of the train's roof under the monster in half....."execution complete" says the mysterious warrior as he stands staring at the sky his black hair very uncombed and under the red coat people notice his wearing bunny slippers the warrior looks at the onlookers with a gentle yet proud smile


"WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT"shouts a male a voice from the onlookers..and what the hell are you wearing..at this point the onlookers start murmuring in protest "oh I probably moved too fast for the mortal eye can see..umm I was saving you...annnd you are welcome...be quick I have places to be..ill be signing autographs now" replies the warrior still on top of the train SAVING MORE LIKE DESRTOYING GOVERNMENT PROPERTY,

Grrr look here is that anyway to treat a god..(citizen)ahahahha god my ass have you seen celestia from genesis city if she said she was a goddess we would believe her or the enigmas association secretary lady silver.ahahahhaahahahha(the warrior makes his laugh twice as long on purpose) you are mistaken for comparing me to that celestia chick am far more powerful..and do not even compare me to that tsundere stereo type silver...(citizen)WELL ATLEAST SHE HAS A PERSONALITY..WHAT ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO BE...A COMIC?now get your ugly pajamas off the train.(warrior)ALright buddy..its go time the so called god begins to fold his sleeves in preparation for a fight...(citizen)I thought you would never ask replies the voice..just then "Ahem"the self proclaimed god freezes in fear as he realizes there are two Tall Humanoid Robots and a woman with office attire standing behind him on the train...the warrior turns slowly"hello...silver" says the warrior with nervous laughter at the end "ummm how long have you been standing there "Tsundere huh"replies silver who is clearly not pleased.."aha..well..it was a joke Silver sama hehehe"this was his attempt at speaking the language from the country silver came from..the country produced manga and anime which our warrior was a fan of at a high rate he believed he would fit in to that country and went there once....when he arrived he begun to look for a subtitle of sorts so he could understand what was being said."well are you goin to explain yourself"silver spoke interrupting his recollection of the country of napaj "well I silver ONEECHAN " was simply joking with these wonderful citizens who I swore to protect humans are too complex to be boiled down to lables like tsundere or yandere hehehehe and..i definitely wasn't planning to throw anyone into the sun..definitely not..not at all"silver stands there listening to his excuse with an unamused look "well..ill be going now good bye my dears" GO TO HELL replies the voice in the audience"ahahaha very lovely people ehe I see you have upgraded your god slayers(nevoursly looks at the robots"anyway..ill be going now"."gladius!"silver shouts to the warrior"yes silver " you forgot to pay for damages" "oh....here is the money"a small piggy bank appears(gladius smashes it with tears in his eyes)there you go(hands over all gold coins in it...im sure all is paid for..with my life savings..and..also ill probably get evicted"says gladius trying to provoke emotion from this indeed tsundere character getting no reaction..at this point the robots with silver look at gladius"umm ill be goin now.(gladius runs away full speed leaving a trail of dust behind him) end of chapter 1


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Apr 8, 2016 6:50 PM #1445248
also need feed back on which of the three stories I wrote you would like to see more of