Name: Lyrix

Age: 37

weapon: double sworded staff

specialty: when in combat mode, he loses his staff and is really fast. (you can see his eye glow in this mode)

ability: fires fire & electricity at the same time from his hand

type: cyborg

story: The military needed new recruits that actually has some skills in them. One day they found someone that wanted to be in the military and was really skilled at everything he did except for accuracy. This guy had a X shape scratch on his eye. Because he was good at everything involving combat the gave him a suit, an armor suit. The suit was a cyborg suit. They also gave him an high tech staff. This guy is named Lyrix.

weakness: well his armor isnt that strong.. so i'd say a powerful sword could bring him down

demo: this one is kinda rushed because the original file was corrupted and i had to start over :(

Thats pretty neat.
I have to say, you're pretty good at some things, and less at others.
For example, you need to work on flow; it was kinda choppy on some places. You should increase your fps as well.
You've got a pretty good understanding of the fun stuff, but I guess that's what you mean when you say 'rushed'.
I'll look forward for your future battles!

thanks man :)

Pretty nice demo
I'd say you need a better transition between perspectives, by this i mean it was hard to tell, at the end, that it went to the grey's view, and not just Lyrix punching the screen
Also, the three guys didn't move at all before being attacked (though this may just be because of rushed-ness

Very nice RHG character. Though I think the weakness could be better besides "a powerful sword could bring him down". The demo is alright, seems like you got a OK grip on effects, you should try focusing a bit on the movements because at some parts it's a bit choppy, so make sure everything flows and you keep all the limbs moving. Then again, the demo was rushed, so maybe that's the reason why some limbs stopped moving and looked a bit choppy. Just work a bit more on those movements and you should be fine.
And what I wanna know is how you made that picture for you character. It looks REALLY good in my opinion. I just love glows.


Also, pictures are supposed to be 150x150 btw, yours is 274x198.

Holy shi- very nice demo there! Good angles too ;'(
Oh yea, so, he shots fire and electricity from his hands right? But not from his staff? I think it's kinda cool tho, or maybe you can add some additions to the staff and not only swords, something like a powerful one and a unique one so it's familiar to everyone.

One more question, does long range weapon has more fatality damages on him rather than big swords?
If no, put that in his weaknesses. That's my suggestion.

Anyways, gl with your battles!

EYYYY look this guy. Noice. But you shoul put some more detail into his weakness apart from "a powerful sword would bring him down"