My two new RHG Demos.

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Xyskal
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May 8, 2016 3:41 AM #1448199
So I posted these here AND on my RHG page because I rarely get critiques on my demos in that.
So I came here.

New demo 1
A bit too fast for my taste :/
New Demo 2
(Yes I know I forgot to get rid of the trails on the last frame)
hamnet
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May 8, 2016 1:07 PM #1448227
work on your shakiness mostly, super shakey
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May 9, 2016 3:49 AM #1448291
your legs are superb
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May 9, 2016 1:34 PM #1448317
well... the animation is still rough also the movement need to following the arcs
Practice more, time by time it will geting better!
Keep it up!
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May 10, 2016 5:00 PM #1448436
Same thing as past animations, work on foot placement. :\
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May 10, 2016 7:53 PM #1448443
Quote from GMR
Same thing as past animations, work on foot placement. :\


What in particular is wrong about my foot placement?
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May 10, 2016 7:55 PM #1448444
Quote from Xyskal
What in particular is wrong about my foot placement?


Pretty sure it's that they're wobbly af
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May 10, 2016 10:57 PM #1448448
Quote from Creepin_Bro
Pretty sure it's that they're wobbly af


Yep.
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May 12, 2016 12:14 AM #1448518
in my opinion the one that you said is too fast looks better than the second one.

one way to solve the leg wobbliness, this is just my idea, duplicate a frame (should be F6) where hes leaning forwards or backwards and erase the body but leave the legs, then skew the legs to make it look more natural and then draw the rest of the body.
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May 12, 2016 10:06 PM #1448587
Really, your biggest weakness is definitely the whole "my lines wobble like mad" biz. I'd recommend you do some line exercises with your drawing tablet or something similar.

http://drawabox.com/lesson/1

Check the first part. That should probably help a bit.

EDIT: Also you probably need some better guidelines. I'd recommend to at least put one at the top of the head and one at the waist. As for me personally I like to put one at the knee and one at the elbow as well. I'd say it's better to have a ton of guides and to slowly parse out the ones you don't need than to have too few guides and end up with a great amount of resizing.