Choreography Practice

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Jun 29, 2016 7:49 AM #1452847
Hello! I finally finished this animation in flash, not sure how long it took since i worked on it inconsistently. I also tried voice over with this. Tell me what you guys think!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BUQ3TZKmn44
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Jun 29, 2016 8:09 AM #1452848
nice choreography ^^ keep it up, i think it will better if fast paced.
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Jun 29, 2016 8:26 AM #1452849
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nice choreography ^^ keep it up, i think it will better if fast paced.

Thanks! Reason is kind of slow is because I wanted to keep the movements realistic. Maybe on my next animation ill do some perspective and cinematic angles.
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Jun 29, 2016 9:03 AM #1452853
well.. this is animation afterall exagerate it!
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Jun 29, 2016 10:13 AM #1452860
Oh man those were some realistic movements! Nice work.
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Jun 30, 2016 12:41 PM #1453008
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Thanks! Reason is kind of slow is because I wanted to keep the movements realistic. Maybe on my next animation ill do some perspective and cinematic angles.


It was too smooth to be realistic. I liked how you did the shields to give them the 3-D illusion. All in all the fight should have been much faster pace, and you shouldn't have paused it halfway through like you did. The only real flaw was the resizing with the legs. Great stuff.
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Jun 30, 2016 10:06 PM #1453067
Thanks! It was hard keeping track with the height of the stickfigure and the legs.