FRAG

1.-Super Speed
2.-Can summon things ( Weapons like guns but not explosive guns and melle weapons + copys of someone )
3.-Lazor Beam ( like GOKU )
4.-Can Telekineticly manipulate summoned things

[COLOR="#B22222"]Weak sopt of every Man + copy of someone got its own brain can turn BAAD

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STATS

Offense: 7/10
Defense: 5/10
Speed: 10/10
Smart: 4/10

STORY

Was born in galaxy named Galaxy SM. With his Brother he traveled thru multiverse to find planed closest to theyr.
They found our planed and lived here 6 years his Brother joined clan voidz he died in war entity helbrich killed him with nova nuke .
Hes been searching 1 year for his Brother when fighting leader of voidz leader told him that his brother was killed. Frag asked leader if he can join them. Now he fight with Voidz helping them with anything.

DEMO

I KNOW DEMO IS LAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

You don't need to make a new thread, just wait for a mod to approve it.

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You don't need to make a new thread, just wait for a mod to approve it.

i know i just wanted to remake it i will delete first later

You could easily just have edited the post instead of making a new thread.

for mod ???

IM DUUUMP XD

This character needs serious work.
The first thing is personal to me, but ease off on the colours, you don't need every paragraph spit into its own colour. It's extremely distracting.
Second is no story, you do need to explain the origins of this character.
And lastly is the one that bothers me the most, how overpowered this character is. Telekinesis, creating and summoning weapons (as well as copies of other people), super speed, powerful (but non specified) offensive and defensive capabilities, and the ability to fire laser beams. All of this and his sole, exclusive weakness is the fact that sometimes he thinks about his deceased brother. Im sorry to say that this doesn't count as a weakness. A weakness by definition is something he himself is weak to, or a certain trait in his fighting techniques/capabilities that his opponents could exploit. You really need to time him down, because if you look at other characters around here, they're fairly 50/50, with every advantage they posses comes a disadvantage.
But good luck, hope you do well.

U gotta improve before u fight people quicky
and more than half of your demo is
"Frag anims" "frag demo"
lol

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