Red - The Madman

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Jul 12, 2016 8:09 PM #1454168
Red

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- Abilities:
Well, here's a basic rundown.
Speed: He can move at Mach 1 speed and he has the reflexes to use it to his advantage.
Power: With a single punch, he can break 5 layers of steel.
Durability: Well, his body can take a beating, but what's really strong here is his mind. He's a masochist.
Now, on to his actual attacks and abilities.
Weapon Wheel: Red has an absolutely massive pile of weapons. The one problem? He doesn't really have a choice which one he pulls out. So, unless he has an extended amount of time to scroll, he has to deal with what he gets.
Eyes: They exude power, allowing him to do a few more planned attacks.
Telekinesis: He can move living things with his mind.
Flame Blast: He has the ability to shoot blue flames from his hands, able to melt steel.
Dark Red Form: Red has a super form under his command. He rarely uses it, as unless he's facing a truly strong opponent, it almost immediately decides the fight. He becomes much more serious about fighting in this form, no longer seeing it as a fun game feeding his masochism. All the abilities mentioned before will gain a boost of epic proportions. His speed will reach Mach 3, and his reflexes even faster. His power will reach the ability to turn skyscrapers to dust with a single punch. His body will be able to take punches as strong as his own. His masochism is instead replaced by a simply non-existent feeling instead of pain. As I said, he'll rarely use this form. It'll take a real serious threat against him, a well thought out attempt to kill him, something that would actually threaten him.
- Weaknesses:
On terms of physical limitations, there isn't really a lot. If he's attacked by a powerful enough attack, he can die. If he's poisoned, there's a serious chance of death. He could be cut to pieces and left buried underground, suffocating. Without help, he'd surely perish.
The real issue for Red is his attitude towards a fight. He doesn't want to have an instant win against someone. He'll most likely tone his abilities down until the opponent proves their own strength. This usually means just dodging around enemy attacks, taunting the enemy a few times, blocking an attack and then throwing the opponent across the arena. His masochism might inspire him to just tank attacks rather than making any attempt to block or dodge. He doesn't really care if he wins or not unless it's a serious threat on his life; he wants a fun time and he wants the opponent to have a real chance of winning.
And, because of this, he's decided to add on an extra condition to his fights; If you're able to land two blows that would normally kill someone, he'll play dead for you, and give you the win.
Unless he's in Dark Red, in which case you need to actually kill him. And, besides this, he does have limits on his durability. He can't tank planet bursting or even city bursting attacks. He can dodge them, but if he's caught in a corner and can't attack, he's screwed.

- About/Story:
Red's past is a bit of a mystery.
Not even he knows the full tale of where he comes from, or why he has a super-powerful body. All he knows is that he wants to have a good time. It's commonly believed that Red had experiments done on him in the past, and this would be why his eyes exude the power to absolutely kick ass. He just woke up in a ditch outside of a town one day. Fortunately for him, this town just so happened to be hosting an RHG arena. He fought there, and managed to beat a few people and get beaten by a few people. But, the experience of the fights led him to travel around the world, participating in more and more fights, be they friendly RHGs or fights to the death between an assassin and a madman. However, after a few easy wins gained by starting off in Dark Red mode, he decided to change up his style.
He wanted both parties to have as much chance as possible, and he wants everyone to have a good time.
- Demo: (the first one's the best depiction of Red)

- Battles: None yet!

- Points: 0/0
I finally decided to make a gladiator.
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Jul 12, 2016 8:54 PM #1454171
First of all, I didn't bother reading half of your abilities. It's far too long and detailed. I read half a paragraph, what should be the normal length for weapons and/or abilities, but then you said: "On to the actual abilities!" I skipped that... Another problem is this guy appears to be quite op. He can travel at the speed of sound AND pack a punch? op if you ask me. Also, if he doesn't like an instant kill, he can just make his powers go full mid battle and win. I don't see how I can make an interesting fight out of that. And at least you used good grammar and punctuation, call me a grammar nazi but I hate anything I can't understand. (Unless it's by someone who is new to English or if it's not even in English)
As for the demo, it's nice and I get what you tried to convey, just a simple and average fight, but just work on your footing and easing.

EDIT: Sorry it was long, there was lots to talk about.
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Jul 14, 2016 7:05 AM #1454388
Nice RHG simple name yo!