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Jul 29, 2016 1:53 PM #1456118
i like the demo bruh but his story didn't really make sence
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Jul 29, 2016 2:44 PM #1456126
You should improve the story. But you're talented, this demo is very smooth.
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Jul 29, 2016 3:25 PM #1456135
Your RHG must have plenty of things. Read the rules (its at the top of clan registry) and then restart your thread or just edit it. You can ask a moderator who is in charge of this typical forum. The story isn't much but I have faith that you can make your thread better ;3. Good luck on trying to fix it ;D
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Jul 29, 2016 5:50 PM #1456168
Heh, I like the guy due to his simplicity and how he looks like some Kingdom Rush character. GL on your future battles m9.
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Jul 29, 2016 7:17 PM #1456195
Your story could use sone work and You could add into jis weakness. Like how does the hook harm him? Shouldn't he be able to with stand electricity since he can use it to fight? Or does he just hurt himself everytime he uses it?
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Jul 29, 2016 11:49 PM #1456260
Yeah i know that the story is weak, but i was soooo tired when i did it :|
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Jul 29, 2016 11:55 PM #1456261
Quote from BillyTheKid7777777
Like how does the hook harm him?


If the enemy reflect/take his hook and throw at himself, he would get hurt
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Jul 29, 2016 11:57 PM #1456262
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Spark

Abilities:

Thunder powers - Uses thuder powers
Hook - Can both pull the enemy, use it to get to a high place or eletrocute the hook to harm the enemy

Weakness:

Hook itself - Use his hook at himself

Demo:
(no sound becussss idk)
http://sta.sh/02f6x7w9yjuk

Story:
He was wandering around when he found a special scarf, and taken it

Hit-List:
None

Points:

0/0


It's not that your story doesn't make sense.
It's just that it seems you took no time on it. Add like at least 2 more sentences mebbe. Even if you are tired.
And the weakness can be countered BECAUSE HE CAN ELECTROCUTE THE HOOK.
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Jul 30, 2016 12:11 AM #1456267
Quote from Haru
It's not that your story doesn't make sense.
It's just that it seems you took no time on it. Add like at least 2 more sentences mebbe. Even if you are tired.
And the weakness can be countered BECAUSE HE CAN ELECTROCUTE THE HOOK.


Yeah ikr but i've updated the story
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Jul 30, 2016 1:22 PM #1456365
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Spark
(Click to Show)

Weaknesses (Click to Show)

Battle type (Click to Show)


Demo:
(no sound becussss idk)
http://sta.sh/02f6x7w9yjuk

Clan
http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?99556-Oxymoron(2-6-members)-New-member

Story:
He was an Thunderbend kid, a day, his trainer has killed everyone from his old clan and escaped...
But an day, Spark has found his trainer and fighted him
Even if he was a kid, he defeated the trainer and become a pro in Thunderbend

Relationship (Oxymoron) (Click to Show)



Hitlist: (Click to Show)


Stats (Click to Show)


Avaliability:
Nope.

Battles:
Spark vs. Tetsu - LOST http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?100462-Spark-vs-Tetsu

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0/1
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Jul 30, 2016 1:29 PM #1456366
Now, the story looks better.
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Jul 30, 2016 1:41 PM #1456367
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Now, the story looks better.


thank ya ^^
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Jul 30, 2016 7:12 PM #1456411
Hi. Now you're a memeber of Oxymoron I'll need something about Spark.
- Color of his eyes
- Will he smile ?
- His personality

And Welcome to Oxymoron !
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Jul 30, 2016 10:41 PM #1456447
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Hi. Now you're a memeber of Oxymoron I'll need something about Spark.
- Color of his eyes
- Will he smile ?
- His personality

And Welcome to Oxymoron !


His color of his eyes demonstrate which are he feeling like, rage, these things

But normal is brown, so i would prefer this

He'll be neutral in smiling

He's sometimes prankster, but determinated to end up the enemy
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Jul 31, 2016 3:40 AM #1456469
Ok, it's perfect.
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