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Jul 15, 2017 9:10 AM #1481991
Ho hooo! Nice.
Right forearm seems a bit lengthy though? Maybe because the elbow part seems all too merged and mixed up? I'm guessing if the forearm is made thinner, it could help in differentiating each part of the hand.
Cool style you've got there man.
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Jul 17, 2017 2:05 AM #1482040
Great job zero.

Only thing I'll note is from the consumer side of digital art.

It seems a bit busy, IMO. It's hard to find the focus of the picture. One would assume the girl, but by instinct the human eye is drawn to the robot/monster thing. It SEEMS to be spewing stuff, but the stuff isn't connected to its mouth much so idk

The girl is pumping something...healing potion? What/why is unclear.

The dirt in the foreground I can assume is from combat/activity near her, but there is no visible cause in this art for the streaked appearance, which suggests dust kicked up by bullets striking the earth.

All in all what I'm getting at is that while the art is fantastic (I can draw a crooked stick person, I think. Ugly AF, though), this scene seems -- TO ME -- to be a case of too much conveying too little.
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Jul 17, 2017 10:02 AM #1482049
ABSTRACT ART ALPHAEUS
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Sep 16, 2017 11:05 AM #1483862
Thanks SA and Alpha!

Going back to the basics:

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Sep 18, 2017 8:44 AM #1483929
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Closer look: https://sta.sh/02ccpb0kbzq3
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Sep 20, 2017 9:45 AM #1484012
Draw this: Image and this: Image
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Nov 9, 2017 3:11 PM #1485462
I'll get to yours next Aza.

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Nov 10, 2017 12:01 AM #1485480
That's some mighty fine animu you got there :3
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Nov 10, 2017 6:40 AM #1485490
That was fun but man I'm bad with my anatomy and men, jeez:

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Nov 16, 2017 3:59 PM #1485700
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That was fun but man I'm bad with my anatomy and men, jeez:


Yeah, but look at the size of that dick:
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and yes I know it's his leg
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Nov 18, 2017 2:22 AM #1485740
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Yeah, but look at the size of that dick:
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and yes I know it's his leg

OH great, now even I can see it.
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Nov 18, 2017 4:03 AM #1485745
alright what if you make the same pose but with scantily clad women?
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Nov 22, 2017 3:14 PM #1485819
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alright what if you make the same pose but with scantily clad women?

Oh hell yeah I can work with that!
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