Bloodlines [Chapter 2]

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Sep 16, 2016 3:44 PM #1460857
Congratulation Smile for getting a part in the story. Right? That's how Hewitt's post works? Because azure said to skip him and hewitt won't add himself... or would he? So Smile was essentially the next person to post no?
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Sep 17, 2016 1:28 AM #1460897
Well now.

I'm sensing some extremely "I'm 'Merican, damn it!" stereotypes on my representation here.

No worries, I like being a human anyway.

Just make sure I get some colts with gold bullets for those magic motherfuckers. >:}
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Sep 17, 2016 2:33 AM #1460903
Good read. Keep it coming.

I guess if you did follow the list, loads of people on the list would purposefully just read it while those who didn't cut it, wouldn't bother. (Thus Hewitt said we're shallow). Which is true. I started reading this with the intention of one day seeing my own cameo or something.

But after reading part one... it has intrigued me and thus shallow needs are brushed aside. Again, love the work.
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Sep 29, 2016 11:53 AM #1462502
Did the two families just spontaneously combust or something?

Because if so I suppose that means that I would be the only member left, since I was demoted to human....

Seriously, though, is this still alive?
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Oct 3, 2016 6:55 AM #1463074
I read the prologue. And it was great. Though it seems weird for someone so secretive to have a voice log in public. Or a voice log at all.
Then I read chapter 1. And it intrigued me. I especially liked how you discribed the feeling of someone loosing something. I could relate to that. If there's any criticism to be had then it's the Undertale references. The first one was kind of funny actually but the second one was uttered in such a moment that it made me sigh. One reference would be enough as far as I'm concerned.
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Oct 3, 2016 7:11 AM #1463076
I'm penning most of ch2. Give me a little more time cos I'm also working on the side :D
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Oct 3, 2016 2:09 PM #1463114
Quote from Hewitt
Give me a little more time


no hewitt

i wont do it
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Oct 3, 2016 3:19 PM #1463121
Quote from theTDguy
If there's any criticism to be had then it's the Undertale references.

For the record, the Undertale references were Veir-specific because he's obsessed with that game :o
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Dec 8, 2016 5:58 PM #1469499
Chapter 2 (Click to Show)
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Dec 8, 2016 8:19 PM #1469525
Heh, I like it.

Thumbs up, dude.

Azzy's bad-ass. >:}
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Dec 8, 2016 9:56 PM #1469585
Oh dang, this got done. That's rad. I'm still up for continuing this so I'll write up Chapter 3 some time.
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Dec 9, 2016 12:56 AM #1469635
I have no excuses for the extreme delay. At one point I was ready to give it up. But its damn insulting to my partner so here it is.

We're working on reorganizing our facts to serve better chapters faster. It is never too late to gain steam once again.
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Dec 9, 2016 12:01 PM #1469691
Well this turned to shit real quick
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Dec 9, 2016 12:21 PM #1469693
Wow that escalated quickly.
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Dec 9, 2016 12:38 PM #1469694
Cool. Cool. Cool.

Can't wait for more.