Hand of Mercy

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Sep 6, 2016 2:19 AM #1459866
Yet another chapter in the lives of my characters, this one focusing on Altaer.

It's a bit on the dismal side, so be warned. Thankfully it isn't all that long (by my standards...).


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Sep 6, 2016 2:43 AM #1459868
Well that certainly got heavy.

Very nicely done! I always enjoy your stories!
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Sep 6, 2016 12:58 PM #1459901
Thanks, Crank. I was trying to give some insight into Altaer's character (since I had not done much of that recently), particularly now that I am performing certain changes with him on a personality level. It just so happens that he doesn't exactly lend himself to happy stories all that much. :P
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Sep 9, 2016 3:18 AM #1460198
he's not very merciful huh
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Sep 21, 2016 6:58 PM #1461344
Quote from Chromium7
he's not very merciful huh


lol. yes. I'm agree with you