Zen the nuclear manipulator

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Dec 3, 2016 4:27 PM #1468851
(Story (Click to Show)


Zen's abbilties (Click to Show)


Weakness (Click to Show)


Demo (Click to Show)



Zen (Click to Show)





Fanart (Click to Show)





Personality:He is pretty nice he only kills his opponents if he has to,he is serious most of the time,he sometimes loses his mind and start's going crazy if he gets reminded by something traumatic,that can only stop if someone makes him go uncounscious









Battles:1
Availabillity:Yes bro fight me o3o
Wins/loses/draws
0 1 0

hope you enjoyed:D

edit:he now has a sword :D and a form
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Dec 3, 2016 7:28 PM #1468870
Over-Powered, and Incomplete.
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Dec 3, 2016 7:42 PM #1468872
blind pls,ur rhg can beat anyone in one punch >:C and what do u mean unfinished?
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Dec 3, 2016 7:43 PM #1468873
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one day he killed someone by accident by putting a nuclear bomb inside the chicken

hope you enjoyed:D


No picture, the demo must demonstrate ALL of his powers, overpowered (which you even bragged about), what's the S on his wristband in his pivart?

I doubt you looked at the "Starting your RHG" section. This looks like a ripoff of Jolt. I don't think you know the definition of a nuclear bomb. I doubt you know what a Mary Sue is.

Edit: You changed some shit so scrap that about Jolt.
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Dec 3, 2016 7:44 PM #1468874
I agree with BlindEite

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Attack Powers using nuclear reaction.
Combustion Inducement
Nuclear Explosion Inducement
Radiation Bomb Generation
Radiation Manipulation


wouldn't Nuclear Explosion Inducement, Radiation Manipulation, and Radiation Bomb Generation instantly kill/give extreme radiation poisoning to anyone who isn't specifically resistant to radiation?

And since combustion inducement is separate from explosion manipulation and fire manipulation, doesn't that mean you can cause anyone to spontaneously combust?

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Atomic Cancellation
Disassembly

Dissasembly seems like it could just take someone apart, instantly killing them, and atomic cancellation literally kills anyone instantly


you know quite a lot of these are from the hero registry, you don't need to get your powers from somewhere, and it's encouraged that you make your own.

also, that is a tiny amount of weaknesses in comparison to all of his powers, you even stated yourself that he has too many to put into one demo.
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Dec 3, 2016 7:52 PM #1468879
i will try and remove some of the powers
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Dec 3, 2016 8:00 PM #1468882
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blind pls,ur rhg can beat anyone in one punch >:C and what do u mean unfinished?


Incorrect, Jolt can't charge up Particles like Saitama can.
Also it's unfinished because of the lack of a 150x150 image, and a Battle legacy/history.
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Dec 3, 2016 8:13 PM #1468883
alright i have removed and added necessary stuff i hope its alright now
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Dec 3, 2016 8:33 PM #1468887
Shyku, real question here:
do you know what an atomic explosion is even like?

The only two atom bombs used in war, both wiped out an ENTIRE city, killing almost all the residents and making it unlivable for decades to come, due to radiation contamination.
Radiation poisoning is also a permanent effect, once you have it, it will stay forever, and it will eventually kill you.
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Dec 3, 2016 8:37 PM #1468889
and that is the point.. i knew what that is in the first place and that is gonna be used only once and that is probably gonna be when aliens come or you know what i mean
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Dec 3, 2016 8:48 PM #1468894
If he uses the atom bomb, it'll kill both him and the opponent. Not a good idea. :P
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Dec 3, 2016 8:49 PM #1468895
actually he wouldn't die because he can manipulate it
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Dec 3, 2016 9:01 PM #1468896
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and that is the point.. i knew what that is in the first place and that is gonna be used only once and that is probably gonna be when aliens come or you know what i mean


yea, but these battles have nothing to do with aliens or apocalyptics, it's for fighting other RHGs, and unless specified otherwise, characters can and will use any power to win a fight.
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Dec 3, 2016 9:12 PM #1468899
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yea, but these battles have nothing to do with aliens or apocalyptics, it's for fighting other RHGs, and unless specified otherwise, characters can and will use any power to win a fight.


nah nah you dont understand,its not about only the rhgs its about the clan too :C
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Dec 3, 2016 9:15 PM #1468900
All I see him as is some secret weapon that the government wants.