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Dec 8, 2016 7:23 AM #1469442
Gladiator: Scorcher

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Abilities: Throwing Fireballs, he can cause a miniature explosion without harming himself, or he can choose to make a huge explosion at the cost of his life, lava beam projectile from hands and flaming punches and kicks, can power up for limited time and increase the effective ness of these abilities, can use fire as a speed boost and for flight. 5 times normal human strength

Weaknesses: Scorcher is cocky and often drops his guard, when moving fast Scorcher has blurred vision. Water obviously. Without his speed boost Scorcher is generally slow. Scorcher can over heat and have to cool down for a while

Story: Scorcher was a science experiment meant to give the military an edge in WW2. He tried to escape but the attempt failed. In order to keep scorcher contained they locked him in a cryogenic stasis until he was needed in battle. He knew he could have escaped but instead he used this to his advantage and meditated for 3 years. After being unfrozen Scorcher attempted to escape again but this time the military was no match and he got away. Now an outlaw Scorcher needed to make money and also have a place where people would not be afraid of him and thought becoming and RHG was the solution for both of those problems.

Clan: Scorcher wishes to one day join Voidz, and fight along side Jolt and the others

Demo:
http://leytoneddy.deviantart.com/art/Scorchers-New-Demo-650554072

Battles: Not Yet

Score

Win: 0
Loss: 0
Tie: 0
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Dec 8, 2016 2:55 PM #1469471
Hello there. To use an image, post a direct link to the image on some image hosting site in [IMG.][/IMG] without yhe "." there. As for the demo, you can simply post a link to it. Most commonly used are DeviantArt and YouTube. Please try to get them up quickly.
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Dec 8, 2016 8:46 PM #1469545
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Hello there. To use an image, post a direct link to the image on some image hosting site in [IMG.][/IMG] without yhe "." there. As for the demo, you can simply post a link to it. Most commonly used are DeviantArt and YouTube. Please try to get them up quickly.


Thanks I will get them as soon as I can!
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Dec 9, 2016 6:13 AM #1469675
Why can I not see the character anymore?
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Dec 9, 2016 6:47 AM #1469677
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Why can I not see the character anymore?


You have a link with too few posts, so you're not registered as a "proper" member yet. I fixed your picture link, but it is still too large. The picture is meant to be 150x150. You also still need a demo. Simply send the stuff to me and I can edit your post without it disappearing.
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Dec 9, 2016 7:25 AM #1469679
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You have a link with too few posts, so you're not registered as a "proper" member yet. I fixed your picture link, but it is still too large. The picture is meant to be 150x150. You also still need a demo. Simply send the stuff to me and I can edit your post without it disappearing.


Ok, do I email them to you
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Dec 9, 2016 8:07 AM #1469681
Yes, PM him.
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Dec 9, 2016 3:47 PM #1469714
I added your demo and made your post visible again.
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Dec 9, 2016 10:20 PM #1469737
your demo runs like a video game character. thats not bad it even looks smooth. i don't know how to explain this exactly it just seems a bit weird. other then that i really like this character. but this part seems redundant. "exploding without harming himself, causing a huge explosion at the cost of his life". i know english might not be your first language and im sorry for how rude this sounds but that kind of makes it seem like he can explode without harming himself but that cause a huge explosion that kills him. i do see the comma there. and most people will understand what your trying to say
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Dec 9, 2016 10:28 PM #1469738
I fixed the explosion part but I am not that great at animating so I can't really stop the "weirdness" but thank you for the heads up

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Dec 9, 2016 10:53 PM #1469742
I think he means that he can create two different power levels for explosions, one that can kill him and one that can't

And your animation seems robotic. It's very stop and go. Living things tend not to move like that. Also, his legs teleport from the pilar of tome stance to throwing stance. He should transition from stance to stance, moving his legs to form the next stnce.
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Dec 10, 2016 6:04 AM #1469780
Ay I see you are using sprites in your demo. Interesting.
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Dec 10, 2016 6:48 AM #1469787
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Ay I see you are using sprites in your demo. Interesting.


Umm I don't know what sprites are?
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Dec 10, 2016 3:25 PM #1469821
https://lmgtfy.com/?q=Sprite+definition

The second definition.
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Dec 11, 2016 1:07 AM #1469903
Quote from LeFox
I fixed the explosion part but I am not that great at animating so I can't really stop the "weirdness" but thank you for the heads up

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now nobody will get confused
Quote from Xyskal
I think he means that he can create two different power levels for explosions, one that can kill him and one that can't

And your animation seems robotic. It's very stop and go. Living things tend not to move like that. Also, his legs teleport from the pilar of tome stance to throwing stance. He should transition from stance to stance, moving his legs to form the next stnce.

nicely said
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