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Stickpage File 578: Farukon - The Sky Guardian (wRHG Submission | Unavailable)

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Dec 24, 2016 12:23 AM #1471168
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Percius R. Farukon



wRHG Profile: Percius R. Farukon, Rank G-B Gladiator

This is the profile of the official Stickpage Rock Hard Gladiator Percy Farukon, and is managed by his publicist.
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“If you want to kill me, you’ll need more than a stone.” -Farukon



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Full Body: He can change his appearance when in the human world to a five foot seven (170.18 centimeters) tall man in his mid-thirties (34 to be exact) wearing a dark gray suit and pants with a white shirt underneath. Percy has gray eyes as well. He weighs approximately 162 pounds (73.482 kilograms). He typically wears a dark gray suit custom made suit with slits on the back for his wings. He also has a wide variety of ties, ranging from dark gray ties with blue stripes to red ties with light gray and dark blue stripes. His friends say that he has every tie in existence. He also has his light brown ninja headband in his pocket. He still has his falconer’s glove on his left hand in this form, but he doesn’t always wear it, since his pet blue falcon can understand English. He is tan in this form with black hair with a hairstyle similar to Jose Rizal’s (if you know who that is). He has a “Bird Ninja Suit” that has a rice farming hat with it, but it’s really just all black attire. He doesnl’t wear this outfit much. It is pretty much just for stealth operations, but even then, he doesn’t wear the hat. His ethnicity is 75% Filipino and 25% Japanese according to most DNA websites, and he looks the part too. He also wears black dress shoes. When not dressed in such a formal way, he will wear sweatpants and gray checkered Vans on any day no matter the weather. He wouldn't typically wear this attire when he has “important business” he needs to attend to. He has a scar on his left eye, which is not too noticeable. His wings are white in color, with a few light blue rows of feathers that are his explosive feathers. Just as a note Percy also has a stick figure appearance he can switch to as well.

Blades is slightly larger than a gyrfalcon, the largest alive falcon species on Earth, and has dark green eyes and a beak made of a special metal that most of his body has. His feathers are blue and had light-blue tinted metal feathers at the bottom of his wings. On top of his wings are blades made from the same light blue metal, and his talons also are made of said metal. When i
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Dec 24, 2016 12:40 AM #1471172
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Dec 24, 2016 12:57 AM #1471174
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It is okay they were confusing when I started too.
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Dec 24, 2016 1:04 AM #1471175
Thank you so much, this really helps :D .
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Dec 24, 2016 1:09 AM #1471176
No problem I like helping.
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Dec 24, 2016 3:48 AM #1471186
If anyone has a constructive criticism, please let me know, I would like to hear what you ppl have to say about my writing and would love to hear how I can make it better!
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Dec 24, 2016 4:27 AM #1471188
Give them some time trust me they will come. Be prepared for all the CnC.
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Dec 24, 2016 4:55 AM #1471191
It's almost Christmas, so most CnC may have to wait. I personally don't have any problems with your character though you might want to reconsider his appearance. He doesn't have to be a stick figure. Here in the written version of RHG, he can take any appearance you want him to. Most of us choose to be more realistic in terms of appearance (like a human, robot, etc) instead of stick figures just to let you know. However, if you want him to remain a stick figure, I think people will be okay with it.

I might critique your demo some time soon as well since your character seems pretty decent to me.
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Dec 24, 2016 6:04 AM #1471195
Other than the previously mentioned appearance, I like Farukon! He's a pretty cool character in my opinion and I like the concept of the wings. Riley might have to keep an eye on this guy... ;)

If this was an RHG, then the stick figure part of the appearance would make sense, but if you need some reference, you can check out my guy in my signature. You described his real world appearance pretty well, but you could probably get rid of the stick figure part. Though if you don't want to you don't have to.
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Dec 24, 2016 3:22 PM #1471208
Merry (early) Christmas!
Here's my two bits on Farukon, though it is my opinion that you should also ask the more experienced people on-site for CnC. O w O

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I hope this helps. Welcome to the forums, and I hope to see you around often!
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Dec 24, 2016 6:53 PM #1471226
Thank you so much, I will change some of things things when I get the chance. I will admit this was a little rushed, so thanks again for your advice! And the 2000 feet I admit was too much, so I will change that right away. Oh, and the chakram bit, I guess I didn't really clarify much about that. The chakram itself isn't a bunch of feathers shaped into a disc, it's more like the feathers combine into one and creates a chakram. Also, the tornado still has four feathers in it, but I guess it's my fault I did not add this. I will add this when I get time to. It being the holiday season makes it hard for me to get free time, but thanks again!
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Dec 25, 2016 2:21 AM #1471262
This isn't something exclusive to you, but it's always thrown me off seeing deadly weapons for characters who don't go for the kill.

Other than that, what kinda explosions are we talking about? What type of damage would a direct hit do? And can you elaborate on those stats? What's a 0, 5 or 10?

Interesting fighter!
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Dec 25, 2016 4:36 AM #1471273
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This isn't something exclusive to you, but it's always thrown me off seeing deadly weapons for characters who don't go for the kill.


At least my interpretation has it as a testament to their discipline but really, all weapons are lethal IRL. Even the "non-lethal" one's such as stun guns and staffs can easily kill somebody.

I hope this doesn't come across as rude Crank and I'm sorry if it does. I just don't want to see this become another restriction.
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Dec 25, 2016 5:08 PM #1471329
It's not a restriction, but if for example, you fight with a sword, I fight with a staff and neither of us are killers, you can mostly swing to block whereas I can swing to break bones. Kuni are cool, but if you don't want to murder people I'd recommend something less deadly.

Just an opinion, and again, a number of people do it, so it's not like it can't be done
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Dec 26, 2016 12:05 PM #1471410
Quote from Crank
It's not a restriction, but if for example, you fight with a sword, I fight with a staff and neither of us are killers, you can mostly swing to block whereas I can swing to break bones. Kuni are cool, but if you don't want to murder people I'd recommend something less deadly.

Just an opinion, and again, a number of people do it, so it's not like it can't be done


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