Zalgo (Veir) vs Dracustos (GeneratorRexDragon)

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Jan 30, 2017 2:01 PM #1474903
Just one story being canon is a bit shite for the other person since they're both workin' hard on their own storylines. And I am biased toward Veir. I like his storyline. I'm gonna keep it.
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Jan 30, 2017 2:27 PM #1474904
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Just one story being canon is a bit shite for the other person since they're both workin' hard on their own storylines. And I am biased toward Veir. I like his storyline. I'm gonna keep it.


True. If it is a tie, I am inclined to keep Veir's merely because it would better facilitate the future battles with the other clan members. I would consider, however, tweaking the whole "total destruction of Dracustos's home town and loved ones" thing. Bit drastic. But that is really up to Gen and Veir. Besides....four more days of votes. We'll see how this turns out.
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Jan 31, 2017 11:58 AM #1474948
THIS IS STILL TIED LOL
Clearly as a tie breaker, both parties should write short stories of their characters having a tea party with an adorable small child
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Feb 1, 2017 1:55 PM #1474993
.................I'm beginning to think this is being done on purpose.
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Feb 1, 2017 2:10 PM #1474996
Or maybe, you know, it's tied. Both stories have different qualities but come out equal.
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Feb 1, 2017 9:24 PM #1475022
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Feb 1, 2017 9:51 PM #1475023
Well now...this is interesting.

We're attracting all kinds of attention here.

I wonder if Dvor has anything to do with this.
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Feb 2, 2017 12:21 AM #1475034
I voted for Veir.

Gen's was good, but I feel a battle is a story where anyone, even someone who has never gone onto Stickpage before, should be able to hop in, see what both characters do, and understand everything.

To really get the best effect from Gen's story you would have to read the previous stories in the "Saga". Veir's functions better as a standalone story.
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Feb 3, 2017 8:36 PM #1475165
So I'm a bit torn between this Veir had the better fight scene , However gens had the better overall story. Veirs fight was a fun read and good one off fight, However gens story left me wanting to know more about his character, and wrath and this so called destiny, the character development and the intractions were by far the higlight of gens. So in my eyes i think gen won this with having a good battle scene and tieing it in with a good story as well.
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Feb 3, 2017 8:46 PM #1475167
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So I'm a bit torn between this Veir had the better fight scene , However gens had the better overall story. Veirs fight was a fun read and good one off fight, However gens story left me wanting to know more about his character, and wrath and this so called destiny, the character development and the intractions were by far the higlight of gens. So in my eyes i think gen won this with having a good battle scene and tieing it in with a good story as well.


YOU RUINED EVERYTHING D:
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Feb 3, 2017 10:41 PM #1475175
Quote from jirocho1
So I'm a bit torn between this Veir had the better fight scene , However gens had the better overall story. Veirs fight was a fun read and good one off fight, However gens story left me wanting to know more about his character, and wrath and this so called destiny, the character development and the intractions were by far the higlight of gens. So in my eyes i think gen won this with having a good battle scene and tieing it in with a good story as well.


JIRCHO YOU RUINED THE PERFECT ENDING YOU SCRUB
WHY
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Feb 4, 2017 7:26 AM #1475198
Gah. And a tie would have been so nice, too.