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Piasu The Wielder of SeverSword

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Feb 5, 2017 6:45 AM #1475292
[CENTER]Name: Piasu

Abilities:
Piasu is a master at hand-to-hand combat, as well as an excellent swordsman. He is great with throwing knives/stars. He wields one long straight sword, and a massive broadsword shaped like a giant butcher knife. He can wield both with one hand, altho the broadsword for a short time. His "Visual-Prowess" (His only "Special Skill") Can see very slight movements of muscles giving him an edge in close combat, and an keen ability to predict his enemies.

Weaknesses:
In addition to his natural human weaknesses, his ranged abilities aren't as great as his close combat skills, which means he is more likely to lose from afar. However, Distance isn't the only way to beat him, Speed and Highly unpredictable movement are ways to get behind his guard and his "Visual Prowess".

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branch of a tree by his legs, with SeverSword stuck on the side of the tree at about his head height when standing. He is holding his throwing knives and stars. His sister, Elise, is visible below him with her sword at her side. She doesn’t like to fight, she only likes to train Piasu for fights. Piasu swings back up-right, and whilst he did so he threw three knives at Elise.

One hits the ground to the right of her, another is blocked by her sword. The last one hits a tree to her left. Piasu growls at the knives that missed. He jumped backward off the branch crossing his arms with knives in between each finger, eight in total. He then throws all eight at Elise.

Four miss their target, two are blocked and the last two are dodged. “C’mon bro, you can do better!” Elise mocks him as she throws her sword at Piasu, who dodges the attack. Piasu focuses on his sister as he throws 3 stars at her. These ones were far more accurate, they hit the ground where she was before she dodged them. “I’m better with the stars. I need to work on the knives though!” Piasu Growls at himself while he pulls six more knives from their holster on his right leg.

“Listen bro, focus on me don’t look anywhere else. Every Time you’ve missed has been because you’re not willing to hurt me and you lose focus on purpose. You have been underestimating your younger sister.” Elise stated matter-of-factly. Piasu knew she was right he knew she would be able to dodge them, not to mention her cloning power. He knows he is fighting a clone, but he still can’t bring himself to hurt anything that looks even remotely like his sister. He needed to get better, but he doesn’t want to hurt the only person he truly loved and this was too much of a dilemma for Piasu. “Bro! Stop thinking about my safety. You know i can handle myself, especially against you bro.” She hoped this would make him slightly angry.

However, it did not have that effect. He just stood still, looking at the six knives. He needed to get better, so he looked up with newfound confidence focused on his sister, and threw three of the knives. One hit the clone in the knee, the other two were blocked. “Nice hit, bro! Told you, you need to focus more and worry less.” The clone melts into the ground defeated and His sister is seen walking towards Piasu.

“We should head to our home.” Their home is a tree house on the tallest tree in the forest. The exterior was made of mostly wood, some stone and looks well designed. It's a two story building with rope bridges built as walkways to other tree buildings. The interior shows a neat recently cleaned living room with a couch and chair in front of a fireplace. There were new things that Piasu remembered not building into this place.

Mainly outlets for electricity and a TV above the fireplace. “What is this sis? And how did you get it?” Piasu genuinely was curious. “It's called a Television. It shows moving pictures that are honestly, very entertaining. It requires electricity which is what the things in the walls are for.” Elise explains pointing at an outlet. “OK it answers my first question but adds another. How do we have electricity in our house in the middle of a forest?” Piasu asks looking at the TV and presses a big button that turned the TV onto the show “Dexter”. “Well that's a bit too complicated to explain now.” Elise laughed. “Anyway let's sit and watch something.” Elise gestured to the couch.


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The two siblings are sitting on the couch Elise is holding Piasu frightened. The movie they were watching ended. It was a horror film that evidently, scared Elise and didn’t faze Piasu. “A strong woman like you, scared by a moving picture. Pathetic.” Piasu mocked his sister with a smile. “Shut up! I’m not scared.” She stated with a sigh. Piasu sighed as well. “Welp, i’ma go check out the perimeter. You know why.” Piasu Jumped out of the building. The sky was dark and cloudy. rain was falling heavily, causing the ground to be soft and muddy. He started walking through the rain. Piasu noticed a silhouette in the distance of the forest. He begins to tail the figure. The silhouette doesn’t seem to notice and Piasu watches as the man walks towards the house. The closer the silhouette gets, the closer Piasu gets to the shadow. The figure jumped backwards and brought a sword towards Piasu. He parried the attack and countered with his own attack. Piasu still couldn’t see exactly who he was fighting as it was still too dark, but his eyes could still predict his enemy. Piasu heard the sound of wood smashing apart. He looked towards his home and saw his sister fall out of the house with another shadowy figure jumping towards her. Piasu lost focus on his opponent and his opponent managed to push Piasu away and dashed towards him ready to strike. The figure managed to cut Piasu’s left hand. Piasu regained his focus and jumped backward pulling knives out of his holster and threw six at his enemy. Three of the knives hit the figure in their heart, while the other three were blocked. He lands on the ground turns toward his sister’s fight and saw nothing but blood. He ran towards the puddle of blood. He grew angrier and followed the blood trail as fast as he could. Once he caught up with his sisters fight he saw that she was heavily injured and the other man was, less injured. Piasu’s eyes begun to glow so bright he looked like a demon of the night. “What have you done…” Piasu said with a mixture of anger and sadness. His shoulder twitched and his teeth grew sharper, along with ever glowing red eyes. This was it, he had let his anger consume him. “No-one messes with my sister and LIVES!” Piasu’s growls echoed along in the darkness and rain. Piasu grabs Seversword off of his back. He moved so fast he seemed to teleport. Piasu stabbed the figure in the chest with SeverSword. Piasu glared at the silhouette directly into the eyes, inches from the figure’s face. Piasu’s eyes had changed from their usual clawed decal into a spiral design originating from a hallowed pupil of glowing red. Piasu brought Seversword up slicing the figure completely in half, blood splashing from the large slice. The rain in the area had changed from the normal water to a dark red blood-like color. Piasu put SeverSword back into its sheathe on his back and went to help his sister. He lifted her arm and checked her pulse. “It’s faint, DAMN IT!” Piasu screamed and punched the muddy ground. Piasu Picked his sister up and sprinted as fast as he had done seconds ago. He sprinted to the closest clinic/hospital. He didn’t have much time left to save her and every second she was like this made him angrier and sadder. Within a minute he had reached the hospital. He begged the ER for help and threw money at them. He NEEDED them to help. They quickly got her onto a stretcher and took her to surgery. Piasu cried for a moment. He’d needed to know who had done this. He stood up, and dashed towards his dead enemy. The sky seemed to have gotten darker. Near his home lay 2 dead men both had a similar tattoo of a dragon around a cross, with the letters “B.h.F” written on the tail of the dragon. Piasu knew the family with this tattoo, he had a sort of “treaty” with them, of which they obviously broke. This made Piasu furious. His eyes started to glow brighter again. However, Something inside of him pulled him away from reality. When he opened his eyes to this new, what he could only call, “Dimension”. He saw himself with those glowing red spiral designed eyes staring back at him. “What the fuck? Who are you and where are we?” Piasu questioned. The other just smiled. “Stop smiling or i’ll wipe it off.” as if to prove that it was not an empty threat he went to grab SeverSword only to grab nothing. He turned to look and saw that SeverSword wasn’t here with him. “Your weapons aren’t here, inside your mind.” The other stated in a darker tone than Piasu’s, still smiling. “What do you want with me? I need to get back to my sister!” Piasu yelled at himself. “And i want revenge for our sister.” The other said. “That isn’t needed we killed the man that hurt her.” Piasu stated at the other. “That isn’t enough, we need to make the assholes suffer. That whole family that betrayed our trust! They must suffer at the hands of the Demon with SeverSword!” The other exclaimed while pointing at an illusion of the whole Bounty Hunter Family. “If they continue to live they will only continue to do what they have done today!” The other’s voice had started getting louder to the point his voice was deafening. Piasu tried to cover his ears from the sound but could not. “If we do not kill them they will kill our sister and you know that! So let me out! Let me help you defend our sister!” Piasu fell to his knees and closed his eyes. He did not know what he could do at this point. The other him has excellent reasons. Piasu was almost about to give in and let the anger control when his sister had showed up and punched the other him. “Are you seriously thinking of letting this asshole out!? You need to control HIM, not the other way around! If you wanna get revenge for me stay by my side as yourself, Use him, don’t be used by him!” She screamed at Piasu, Emphasizing her point by pointing at the other Piasu. “Y-your right!” He said to his sister then turned to look at the other him. “You are not in control here, I am! If i let you do anything, it’s sit here and rot while i take the power you posses!” Piasu growled at himself. Piasu closed his eyes. When he opened them he was standing over his dead enemy, his eyes back to normal clawed design, not glowing. However, he felt like he is faster, stronger and more capable. He also felt his eyes were a ton more accurate. As if he could see individual cells, as if he could almost guess the future of an opponent. He began to walk back to the hospital his sister was at. Once he had gotten there his sister had been out of surgery and sleeping calmly. He had written a note and laid it next to her. ‘Hey sis, if i’m not here when you wake up, i’ve gone to rebuild our home. I will tell you everything that had happened.’ When Elise was able to head home, she walked home to see the house has had significant exterior upgrades. Primarily better defenses, traps that only Piasu and Elise can see. Retina scanners attuned to Piasu and Elise’s eyes. Stone walls no longer wooden, with steel beams for support lined from the tree to key areas of the house. Elise was wide-eyed when she saw all of this. She had only been in the hospital for a few days and Piasu said he was gonna rebuild, not do a complete overhaul. “There you are. I’m sorry I couldn’t make it to the hospital when you were released, i was, as you can see, very busy. I was told this thing here, is a lock that scans your eyes and only unlocks you your eyes. I’ve had it tested and it works. It has both our eyes in it’s database only, you won’t understand all i’ve had to learn for all these upgrades. The interior is something you might enjoy, I believe.” Piasu spoke from the balcony kicking a long steel ladder down. Elise climbed up the ladder to the large stone building. Piasu had unlocked the door and held it for her. “Ladies first.” Piasu laughed. Elise chuckled as well and entered. The interior looked beautiful the walls were wooden and painted a gorgeous black, so she assumed the stone walls were an outer layer for protection, there were framed paintings that hung on the wall. The furniture were a beautiful black leather that matched the walls perfectly. The TV was still standing on top of the fireplace that hadn’t changed. All the rooms had the same black paint. There was a new room added, a kitchen with appliances that would make Piasu and Elise’s lives in terms of cooking much easier. “So, you had completely changed our home from a prehistoric museum to a beautiful modern home? I love it Bro!” Elise said excitedly. “Let’s just say i read a ton of books on technology and remodeling. This was a tough thing you accomplish.” Piasu explained. “I bet you’re tired, those hospital beds are so uncomfortable i can never sleep much in them.” Piasu said as he showed Elise to her room. When they got there, a rectangular box wrapped in black paper with a bow on it. The box is about the size of Elise’s hand lay on they cleanly set mahogany nightstand next to her bed. “If we are upgrading to modern times we will need this” Piasu stated pointing at the little box. Elise looked at it and began unwrapping it neatly. When she finished unwrapping it, she found a box with a picture of a modern smartphone, colored black. She looked back towards Piasu and saw that he was holding out one of his own. Same black color as her’s. She stood up and jumped on Piasu, hugging him. This sudden weight caused Piasu to grunt and fall backwards on the floor. Bo
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Feb 5, 2017 3:05 PM #1475317
Nice work! It's just that you need to make an introduction thread so that we can know you better :D. Welcome to sp my friend!

EDIT: Post your introduction thread here. Also here are the forum rules if you didn't read them yet.
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Feb 5, 2017 6:00 PM #1475325
I did make an intro post xD
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Feb 5, 2017 6:54 PM #1475329
Cool character and welcome. I can see already that you've read the rules and I wish you luck in future battles. Unfortunately if you ever wind up fighting me, my character exploits all the weaknesses you listed by default XD
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Feb 5, 2017 6:59 PM #1475330
Thank you Urako and Lol then i guess i can't really fight you without difficulty
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Feb 5, 2017 7:13 PM #1475331
Don't worry about it, It's just a joke I threw in there. Anyways, all I have to say now is good luck and i'm sure you'll do fine.
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Feb 5, 2017 7:17 PM #1475332
Lol Thanks man. (I don't got anything left to say lol)
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Feb 5, 2017 7:31 PM #1475333
Quote from PiasuSan
Piasu is originally a Naruto Oc.


This is all the CnC this character will ever need.

That being said, I wish you most of luck and hope you'll stick around for a bit. Why don't you start looking for someone to fight with now that you're here? :)
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Feb 5, 2017 7:35 PM #1475335
Is that a compliment or Nah i cant tell? lol
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Feb 5, 2017 8:35 PM #1475343
Issuing challenge as of now. You are free to accept or decline it. Starting date Tuesday 7th. End date Tuesday 14th. If you decide to take it on, best of luck.
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Feb 5, 2017 8:53 PM #1475351
DelorMaximus I Accept your challenge. your Wrhg seems very challenging, and i look forward to writing this.
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Feb 5, 2017 11:05 PM #1475370
I wish the best of luck to you! Just be aware Delor is a veteran writer, so don't be discouraged if you do lose and instead learn to improve.
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Feb 5, 2017 11:14 PM #1475372
Yeah i can tell i've read their Wrhg page, and their side of the battles they've had. my problem is i might end up writing the battle too short ;-;
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Feb 5, 2017 11:41 PM #1475374
Quote from PiasuSan
Yeah i can tell i've read their Wrhg page, and their side of the battles they've had. my problem is i might end up writing the battle too short ;-;


Length isn't a problem so long as it's a complete battle. What matters is the quality. And like Shapiro said, don't be discouraged if you lose.
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Feb 5, 2017 11:42 PM #1475375
Thanks for the info Urako
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