A Little Song I Made

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Aug 11, 2008 10:02 PM #217163
Well, my hardrive finally went out on my other computer so I'm on my other machine that just loves to freeze on me. So I wrote a song.

It always gets old huh?
Yeah
It kinda makes you wanna...
break into a rage?
Yep

I hate computers
I hate their problems
I hate their hardrives
I hate them all
and all it's wires and circuits

Boom de adda boom de adda bom de adda boom de adda

I hate their hardrives
I hate the motherboard
I hate their RAM
I hate the freezing
and all it's trouble

Boom de adda boom de adda bom de adda boom de adda

I hate CPUs
I hate the error codes
I hate it's drivers
I hate it's BIOS
With all my energy

Boom de adda boom de adda bom de adda boom de adda Boom de

adda boom de adda bom de adda boom de a
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Aug 11, 2008 10:06 PM #217168
it's a terrible song never write anything again
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Aug 11, 2008 10:07 PM #217169
**** off f-

Go eat a dick, I'd prefer you choke on it.
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Aug 11, 2008 10:08 PM #217170
hey man, I was just giving you constructive criticism
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Aug 11, 2008 10:09 PM #217171
More like deconstructive critiscism.
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Aug 11, 2008 10:11 PM #217172
yeah its terrible never write anything again
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Aug 11, 2008 10:46 PM #217222
That's deep
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Aug 11, 2008 10:50 PM #217228
*Holds out lighter*

ENCORE, ENCORE!
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Aug 11, 2008 10:50 PM #217229
That's pretty bad .
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Aug 11, 2008 10:58 PM #217235
that gave me a boner, it was awsome, and deep.No, shit.
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Aug 11, 2008 11:11 PM #217243
I'm so using that to make a song.
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Aug 12, 2008 4:34 AM #217857
Is it meant to be rapped? it seems like you thought you didn't need to give a
second thought to the lyrics just because it was "rappish." which is ignorant.

anyhow it had no meaning, meter or rythem, or anything else that would make it not totall shit. i can honestly say a 5 year old could easily do better.

(I'm not flaming this is my honest opinion, as I'm sure you can see if youve read the "song"...)
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Aug 12, 2008 4:43 AM #217874
It wasn't meant to be an actual song. If you read everything before the lyrics I'd hope you can tell that this was a new way to rage for me.
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Aug 12, 2008 4:53 AM #217892
are you scatting in there?
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Aug 12, 2008 4:54 AM #217893
This thread wreaks of fail.