Ok so here we go, said I'd refrain from logging in for this one, but I wanted to vote so.
CnC's on Mustika's part:
As C3 said, the intro was bland. The first 50 seconds of the animation were compromised of smack-to-face information with really fast text that almost couldn't be read. The text colors were a bit bothersome as well. But hell, at least it was simple, and actually quite understandable.
Everything after that was pretty nice. Pacing was great. Combat wasn't that all impressive, but it was creative. The hits weren't what you'd expect from a Dragonball-ish animation, but it was actually grounded to a more "human" fight, if you will.
Ending was ok, although I didn't see how the backstory with OP's sister was necessary, unless you two specifically used that as a buildup for a next animation.
Overall, well done.
Now, to OP's
-20 second intro.
The fight buildup was good, and I like how the background syncs in with the simplistic style. Visually, everything looks fine, nothing really eye wrenching.
Before the fight while they were talking, some subs were a bit fast, that's all I can say about that.
Combat was amazing. Even if it was purely 2d, it was enough to keep me seated throughout the whole battle. Combos were there, etc.
-Kinda don't like the whole super saiyan trope going on, but the combat was still enough to keep me watching.
Ending was... Well, ok, what's with the whole backstory involving siblings you guys, lmao.
Overall, it was more of a "fight" fight, good job.
Vote goes to OP34 for this one, sorry Mustika.