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Eric 'Lightbringer' Kassaran (RE-UPLOAD)

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May 24, 2017 7:58 AM #1480068
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t out of wedlock. Not knowing a parent can be a terrifying experience, leaving you with enduring doubts over your legacy. But perhaps an even bigger horror is knowing your bloodline and all its implications. That, at least, is the case for Aurelius ‘Eric’ Kassaran.

The year 4000BCE was a defining moment in celestial history. The rise of the burgeoning human consciousness, still grappling with its childish versions of right and wrong created the realms of the other. Heaven and hell became the homes of the creatures of angels and demons, made to represent good and evil in their absolutes.

Out of these races came Niramel, the angel of mind. Kind, benevolent, and saintly, the angel descended to Earth out of desire to help and aid the creatures who birthed her. For ten years she wondered the wilderness, a figure of wonder and awe to those in her midst. And then, she stumbled upon something she had never seen before. Pure evil.

Xavier Eloque, the tyrant of flesh, captured Niramel when she stumbled upon his camp. Xavier was complex, born with both the ability to rewire his flesh into robotic appendages, as many as he could afford to create, and the ability to drain tissue of energy to create even more. His goal was simple; subsume all sapient creatures and turn those who didn’t serve him into batteries for the creation of an unstoppable robotic armada. His sadism and cruelty shocked the angel, but the worst of his actions was not directed towards others, but to her.

Entranced by her beauty, Xavier made Niramel his own personal toy, an outlet for sexual frustration. Countless times the angel was violated, and countless times she would cry herself to sleep in chains, lamenting her lost freedom and the horror she had witnessed within his soul. After 3 months, she realised that the constant abuse had left her with something terrible; pregnancy. For a celestial to bear or beget the child of a mortal was unacceptable. And yet, by the laws of her race, her children could not be killed in the womb or outside. Terrified for their safety, Niramel escaped, running into the wilderness.

Six months later, Aurelius came into the world with his brother, Terminus. Born like yin and yang, one came with wings of white, the other with wings of black. Though terrified of Xavier’s retribution, and in trauma of her abuse at his hands, she resumed her life as a wandering hero, raising the children to follow in her stead. The brothers lived with their mother on the move, growing fast, learning much, and sparring and duelling. Indeed, when he was ten, Aurelius was given a gift. His control of the sacrosanct was rewarded with the twin blades of Drakmar, a gift to Niramel from her father, the angel of dusk. The blades bonded to his soul, and became an inseparable part of his psyche.

But at age eleven, his life was smashed to ruins. Xavier located the small family in a camp. Niramel froze in terror, and left the two brothers afraid and alone. The hot-headed Terminus urged his brother to run, claiming he would quash the foolish man who dared threaten their family. Only a short while later, Aurelius watched from a distance in abject horror as the monster in human form violated his mother, ending the deed by pressing steel tentacles through her back and out her stomach, all within eyesight of his screaming brother.

Aurelius was left alone, his brother disappearing, probably to become a human battery for Xavier’s use. He wondered the wilderness in a catatonic state, devolving into a near psychopath, and he lost control of his abilities completely. Though after few scant years he would come to rue the futility of his lonely walk, he realised that he still had lost his powers. For years he wandered the wasteland, trying desperately to call his powers back to him. He only rediscovered his own abilities by looking inside his soul, using the power of his mother's Mindwar stone. Just what he saw he never speaks of, and thus no one knows. All that is known is that after this literal soul search, his powers surged back in full force, and it took him two more years
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May 26, 2017 8:11 PM #1480189
This character seems to be a slight bit oriented towards the "overpowered" end of the spectrum.

Such as having blades "so powerful they are unimaginable" or being "the undisputed Lord of light"

"Near unlimited energy"


The ability of flight


Mind reading

Just kinda seems like a bit much, even to just glean all that from a simple skim of the app. I'm sure a full read would find more
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May 26, 2017 8:28 PM #1480192
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Gender: Male
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How does this work exactly? Like -- is it not known what he wants sexually, in terms of a partner, or is it not known what he has sexually, in terms of genitals? Both? Don't feel obligated to answer. Just curious. :rolleyes:
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May 27, 2017 3:12 AM #1480204
Yup, I also noticed that the original one was GONE
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May 27, 2017 4:41 AM #1480206
I just got home and am about to pass out, but it likely vanished because edits (maaaybe with links) need to be approved by mods. If it ghosts again, might want to PM Azure, I'd say he's most active here
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May 27, 2017 4:47 AM #1480208
I agree with Rusted One. There just seems to be too many abilities and too little weaknesses for the guy. I do like the concept, but it's just a wee bit OP.
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Jun 8, 2017 8:54 AM #1480712
Thank you all for your feedback and your suggestions for edits and balances. I've tried to add more weaknesses to the character to make him more balanced, and I hope you keep offering feedback and ideas.
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Jun 15, 2017 11:44 AM #1480962
Some info that I think you might want to check out (aka, do so, it's important for you)
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Jun 16, 2017 8:01 AM #1480995
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Ohhhhh... Another charming asshole. Greaaaat...
Ok, look here you fucker. I hate you, stop talking, and get the FUCK OUT OF MY STORE!


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Would you kindly stop thinking with your reproductive organ? It makes me feel ridiculously uncomfortable. Or, you could do something better, and just stay at home all day. You are honestly a classless pig.


If this is a formal challenge, I am more than prepared to accept Alphaeus (once I am available again, of course)
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Jun 16, 2017 9:08 PM #1481019
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If this is a formal challenge, I am more than prepared to accept Alphaeus (once I am available again, of course)


It was, but is contingent upon me first completing the other two battles ahead of your (my battle with Veir will be done in a week, and then I'd say give another few weeks for my battle with Jae. So, sometime in August is when we'll get together). Go ahead and fight others in the meantime, since there isn't anything terribly canon riding on this battle.

Sound good?

(Side note, you did quite well on your most recent battle. I thoroughly enjoyed it).
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Jun 16, 2017 9:41 PM #1481021
BEHOLD MY SUMMONING POWERS AT WORK

BEHOLD....


YOUR POST RETURNS FROM MOD-LAND!!
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Jun 16, 2017 9:44 PM #1481022
Thank you, mystical man of incredible power.

Your powers are truly immense and wonderful.

May you receive eternal rewards and accept my immense gratitude for services rendered.
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Jun 16, 2017 9:50 PM #1481024
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May you receive eternal rewards and accept my immense gratitude for services rendered.


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Jun 18, 2017 6:19 AM #1481082
Out of curiosity, how well known are Eric's powers? Specifically, the mind-related powers. Is that on the down low, or is it something people are aware of?
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Jun 18, 2017 7:52 AM #1481088
Eric tends to keep the stone a closely guarded secret. He doesn't often use it in battle, and it is only useable with the very strict conditions attached to it in his profile.

And again, it is reversible. Which presents an obvious problem with repressed memories of torture and trauma.
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