There are a lot of issues with this, I won't cover everything but I'll start with the shift in the background at 0:46. There is a total lack of pace, everything feels sort of...sequential? Like an action happens, then there's a pause, then an action happens, then there's another pause, so on and so fourth. There's far too much reading, and also quite a few typos / spelling mistakes. I think generally you could improve on easing. Good effort, keep up the practice.