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Night of the Wolves - preview

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Aug 13, 2008 4:59 PM #220359
Hi everyone. This is a preview of the new project i´m working on.
Tell me what you think.

www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=805012
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Aug 13, 2008 5:08 PM #220367
The fullbody looked awkward. His head wobbled like glue and and he needed a face. But it looks good.
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Aug 13, 2008 5:21 PM #220388
your right with the head. hope i can fix that
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Aug 13, 2008 5:21 PM #220390
Iz ok. The fullbody looked pretty funny IMO and I actually like the FB style and I think you should stick to it.
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Aug 13, 2008 6:23 PM #220457
whats this based on???
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Aug 13, 2008 10:06 PM #220701
i like the background and stuff but the fullbody was kind of akward
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Aug 13, 2008 10:11 PM #220709
Looking really great so far. I hope you'll be finishing this!
The head was really wobbly. You should just copy and paste the head all the time.
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Aug 14, 2008 6:42 AM #221492
i know the fullbody isn´t that good. I´ve just started with fb´s.
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Aug 14, 2008 6:46 AM #221493
Bad trailer, it doesn't make me wanna see it, as it just shows a guy getting mauled. So we don't know what will happen next, a good stratergy, but the bad BG's and sloppy animation made it seem boring.
If you just start FB, don't make a big movie right away.
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Aug 15, 2008 9:33 AM #222852
i know that i have toimprove alot. I´ve just started with animating fb´s. And i´ve started to animate with flash 4 months ago.
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Aug 15, 2008 10:02 AM #222923
i like the back ground :)....and the sounds are spooky :)) ...bye
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Aug 16, 2008 9:04 AM #224073
erm thx.....bye ^^
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Aug 17, 2008 2:50 AM #224702
wen did this whole fb fad start? most of you guys cant even animate stick figures... anyway seemed ok but to be honest im not really interested in watching it from the trailer, it was kina boring :/
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Aug 17, 2008 3:29 AM #224734
its okay, but the fbs head was weird, and i think he should have changed position at least once
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