My First completed animation

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Wishfulshot

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Aug 14, 2008 8:23 PM #222131
Hay guys

This is my first, completed animation that i have made in flash. Hope you enjoy

http://www.swfme.com/view/1108762

This was made a while ago, and i am trying to make another one but i can't get motivated enough

[Yes, i am samo300, it's just my xbox name and this is a new name that i made for this forum]
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Aug 14, 2008 8:58 PM #222162
It's not too good, really.
Work on physics and movements.
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Aug 14, 2008 10:06 PM #222211
Physics wasn't my goal with this, just to make an animation and build up from there
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Aug 14, 2008 10:14 PM #222219
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Physics wasn't my goal with this, just to make an animation and build up from there



Without physics, animations don't look very good, they look rushed and not well done.
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Aug 14, 2008 10:31 PM #222238
Well it is my first so gimmie time
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Aug 15, 2008 12:11 AM #222338
if you make an animation, you should do your best to make it as good as possible, not just focus on one thing and forget about everything else. anyways, apparently he can fly. and he has a strange body. ummm too choppy and needs more movement, it kinda looks like hes jsut floating around the screen. effects were poor, dont bother with them for now, focus on basic movements, like everyone always says. and dont do gradients, especially for a backround, unless you know how to use them so they actually look good. also dont use the noob excuse to not have to listen to comments. take it like a man.
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Aug 15, 2008 9:33 AM #222853
But i'm not a man :o
And you can't tell me that you are at the standard you are now when you first started
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Aug 15, 2008 9:40 AM #222865
Quote from Wishfulshot
Physics wasn't my goal with this, just to make an animation and build up from there


Whatever animation you make, you should try to make it with good physics. That's basic stuff. That's a really bad excuse.
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Aug 15, 2008 10:00 AM #222917
not really good...but i was worst when i made my first anim,:)),,so keep practicing
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Aug 15, 2008 10:25 AM #222965
Quote from Wishfulshot
But i'm not a man :o
And you can't tell me that you are at the standard you are now when you first started


How good he is doesnt matter the slightest. He told you what to work on and that's what matters. Stop whining and take the crit.
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Aug 15, 2008 6:17 PM #223216
Quote from Wishfulshot
But i'm not a man :o
And you can't tell me that you are at the standard you are now when you first started


i didnt say i was at the standard, and how would you know where i started, i started years ago, and recently changed my style completely.

Ty, strills.

just accept the critizism as black and white facts