Mauve---A womans greed--- RHG

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Dec 11, 2017 11:54 AM #1486315

Mauve is very self-centered, greedy. She was sold into slavery for her parents profit. While her brothers and sisters used the money they got from her.
Mauve was alone, tortured, slaved of course, and full of rage. Teaching herself martial arts, she escaped prison and murdered her family. Stole money and replaced her hands with robotic parts for power.

POWERS: Lightning, speed, martial arts.

WEAPONS: A skinny rectangle sword.

Weaknesses: Hands will overheat and explode after to much use, killing her.

Very low stamina.

Can cut herself with her own blade.

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Dec 11, 2017 10:59 PM #1486328

PitchEnder's 100% legit review of this character starts now!

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Mauve is very self-centered, greedy. She was sold into slavery for her parents profit. While her brothers and sisters used the money they got from her.
Mauve was alone, tortured, slaved of course, and full of rage. Teaching herself martial arts, she escaped prison and murdered her family. Stole money and replaced her hands with robotic parts for power.

POWERS: Lightning, speed, martial arts.

WEAPONS: A skinny rectangle sword.

Weaknesses: Hands will overheat and explode after to much use, killing her.

Very low stamina.

Can cut herself with her own blade.

Synopsis: All of this is rather bad. Please consider a full rework.

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Dec 12, 2017 2:24 AM #1486336

Some one with lightning based robotic hands, wonder where I've heard that one before...

Check out the link Natsura sent, as well as this one: http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?33615-Starting-your-RHG

So yea, the page is done wrong and the character is meh, definitely needs a rework.

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Dec 12, 2017 7:09 PM #1486350

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Can cut herself with her own blade.

Anyone can do that with almost any blade, that's not a weakness.

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Dec 12, 2017 10:03 PM #1486352

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Anyone can do that with almost any blade, that's not a weakness.

Colossus can't do that... How could you forget about him?

#MutantLivesMatter

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Dec 14, 2017 3:17 AM #1486372

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Colossus can't do that... How could you forget about him?

#MutantLivesMatter

What in the name of Helix fossil is a colossus?

#DoMutantlivesreallymattertho

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Dec 14, 2017 4:21 PM #1486381

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What in the name of a Helix Fossil is a colossus?

Bob Kek Wat strikes again.

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Dec 16, 2017 1:15 PM #1486400

He used an h Alphaeus, nice try.
Also Xys, Colossus is one of the X-Men and he's made of some super hard metal. Might be adamantium, idk.