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First Animation (May be nub but plz view)

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falsehope

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Aug 18, 2008 9:34 AM #225956
Thks to droidz.org and creators of 'Electric Beam' & 'Xiao Xiao Background'.
Please comment and suggest things I can improve on.
*Took 1 day to edit original.
If you wish to view original, click Rabstar's URL just below this post

V1.25http://img301.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlesshv6.gif
V1.5 http://img181.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlessxt3.gif
V1.5(Screen Shot)
http://img264.imageshack.us/my.php?image=screenshotheadlesswk8.png
The red circle is edited in Paint. So it won't show up in the animation.
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Aug 18, 2008 9:45 AM #225962
http://img148.imageshack.us/my.php?image=headlessnv5.gif
ur welcome lol
um...nice beam, but well
there isnt much in it
try basics
like, walking, then running, then a jump, then punching, then kicking then a combo, thats what i did!
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Aug 18, 2008 10:06 AM #225975
beam was good, but you need colour.
falsehope

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Aug 18, 2008 10:17 AM #225977
Well, thanks for your suggestions and I plan to make what you suggested.

Improvements(May not come out):
-Colour for beam(Different colour for every frame?)
-Another StickMan enemy
-Punch & Kick Combo
-Guns?

Well do post your views!:Smile:
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Aug 18, 2008 10:20 AM #225978
All it has going for it are .stks that aren't yours, such as the background and the beam. I guess look at tutorials, and watch some pros' stuff. Maybe even watch someone else running in real life and try to copy the movements.

But yeah, work on everything. And apparently you shouldn't use the default stk
falsehope

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Aug 18, 2008 10:31 AM #225981
Thanks, Bonk, for your review of my animation. Well I'll try to make a new background, but I can't really change the stickman...
I could make my own beam... but I sucks at it.

Anyway, thank you again.
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Aug 18, 2008 11:37 AM #226001
for the beam try and keep it one colour. if it's long then make it change every frame.
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Aug 18, 2008 3:58 PM #226137
Hmm hmm.Welcome to SPP hope.Since your at a early stage I suggest you should find a mentor.Do basic animations.Like for example:A ball dropping,Someone walking then running a punch a kick.

I think I could help you.Do you have msn?
falsehope

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Aug 19, 2008 7:26 AM #226942
Sry but I got no msn. I working on this animation currently...
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Aug 19, 2008 10:55 AM #227062
cool beam. If you extended that and had someone else running in and then they get blasted would be great. Really good =D
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Aug 22, 2008 3:41 AM #230119
Practice makes perfect
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Aug 22, 2008 11:35 AM #230468
very stiff ands needs easing, should post in begginer forums first b4 posting a thread
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Aug 22, 2008 1:53 PM #230562
first anims are always nubby, meh just work on basics just check the tutorial sexun.
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Aug 22, 2008 8:23 PM #230809
try not to use the default stickman it has no backbone and its stiff as hell
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Aug 22, 2008 8:24 PM #230810
you can get another stickman at
droidz.org
i use future guard
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