i dont see anything

You don't? Wow. Oh yeah, Satyr posted this, this is just a site bug.

wow that sucked
i hate myself cause im in it

It took you 4 hours to make that? That's a lot of time spent on something like that. Blood needs more particles. And it should spray out a bit too. Movements were too sloppy; use a thicker brush tool and decrease the brush smoothness a bit too.

It was awful short too.

Yeah, but come on. A guy JUST comes to stick page and makes a mania. I realize I animate horribly. I will remake in the future, if I'm still on stick page, when I get more experience.

Um. Wow... That wasn't very good. You have to work a lot on everything.

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I'm glad I didn't put myself in that o.O

Way too short... especially for a mania...

Raffi and Paco, that wasn't any constructive critisizm at all.

Brian C and Souleater, that wasn't enough advice.

Thank you 0mega, for actually giving me advice.

Ok, fine.

The music didn't fit at all.
The blood sucked.
You killed everyone off too quickly, especially Darkness-Darkness.
The sticks sucked. They were too wobbly.
Everything except for sAcReD's lightsaber was badly drawn, especially the cheeseburger, which was a ripoff of Stick Figures on Crack.
It was waaaaaayyyy too short for a mania as Brian C said.
There was only 1 scene.
There were no effects, partciles or anything in it.

Enough advice for you?

Yes, I will practice. My next mania will be started sometime in 2008. Maybe even 2009.

Ok =)

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Yes, I will practice. My next mania will be started sometime in 2008. Maybe even 2009.

Ya know.. to get better you need to practice at it. It doesn't just come to you 'in due time.' Get at it! Make like 400 versions if you must! >:V Blahblahblah.

very short. unintresting. sorry dude but improve first. work on the blood as well.