i ****ing suck, i cant produce anything good. Please give me c&c. I know it sucks, don't go easy on me i want to improve.
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Started by: Cizzil | Replies: 6 | Views: 321
Aug 23, 2008 3:20 AM #231112
Aug 23, 2008 3:26 AM #231116
Practice makes perfect. No ones perfect. Do what you want.
Aug 23, 2008 3:29 AM #231122
Do what i want? k maybe some actually feedback
Aug 23, 2008 9:11 AM #231342
it was pretty good. i liked the beginning, exept for the end.. the smoothnes wass okay..
but... just, i donno. more action or something. nice try ;)
sure not the beginner section.. i think, if theres a flash beginners section
but... just, i donno. more action or something. nice try ;)
sure not the beginner section.. i think, if theres a flash beginners section
Aug 23, 2008 9:34 AM #231349
more frames in between your movements will help at the moment thats what you seem to be lacking aswell as some well needed easing throw it all in, give it a blend and VOLAR.
Aug 23, 2008 9:35 AM #231350
He shouldn't just stick there at the end. The weight of his body would throw him foreward a little, unless he's a feather, lol.
Also, what Cory said.
Also, what Cory said.
Aug 23, 2008 7:18 PM #231651
Adding on to what Raffeh and Cory said, when the left stick knocks the right stick over he seems to fall with no bends. He shouldn't fall straight down. Apart from that there is nothing wrong as the quality of the fighting is good.