http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1220686015
http://fwup.net/view/vg4bd9pyw3

EDIT: FB jump

i was bored and just did a quick full body, never done one before and i think it turned out pretty good for a first.

can you upload with something else like Fwup.net ?

do i really have to?

>_< fine...

thanks <3

It's really clean, but too short to even judge.

yeh, im making a jump one atm, it's almost done, just doing the landing.
i suck at fb, ;]

Does he shrink at the end? It looks like it...

on the jump one?
yeh he does a bit, i tried to sort it out a lil' but i couldnt be asked to do it completely. it's alright for a first fb rite?

First: The movements were too fast, I can't even tell if he touches the ground, and he looks like he's skipping, You run sideways, we should be seeing the side of his body, tho the style is nice. Slow it down, look at yourself run, you won't look like that.

Second: Well, he doesn't really look like he gets enough force to actually jump, he doesn't bend his arms, legs or anything, it's like a stick jumping, just seems wrong. Try making the guy less fat, or longer legs, just make him bigger. Also, had no easing, he went up, then went down, he should go up fast, stay up for a bit, while loosing force, thne slowly descend down, and pick up speed, until he touches the ground. Aslo he shrunk while in the air.

Keep trying tho, Fb is furfilling once you get good with it, and you got a great style.

Quote from Hackor Pickel

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1220686015
http://fwup.net/view/vg4bd9pyw3

EDIT: FB jump

i was bored and just did a quick full body, never done one before and i think it turned out pretty good for a first.

On the run, it doesn't look like the legs crossed over, and the arms don't move right at all.

Extreme resizing on the jump.

Quote from Sunder Forge

look at yourself run

lawl

i prefer the jump, and i hate the running one now. and...how can i look at myself run?
thanks for the CC guys

and sunder forge, u said u love my style, i got inspired by your sig :D
i didnt know it at the time, but now i look at it, that's where i developed it from =)

Quote from Hackor Pickel

i prefer the jump, and i hate the running one now. and...how can i look at myself run?
thanks for the CC guys

and sunder forge, u said u love my style, i got inspired by your sig :D
i didnt know it at the time, but now i look at it, that's where i developed it from =)

I don't even know, I've never said that before.
:/

That's the first time I've told someone to look at themselves perform an action.

lol k
either way, i suck at this...
practice makes perfect though :/