http://striderxii.deviantart.com/art/Cartoon-Demon-100299542
Cartoon Demon, read description

-I personally think this is a good cartoon attempt

http://striderxii.deviantart.com/art/Head-Sketch-2-100299919
Head Sketch

-TEST

comments, criticism, k

i think you need to calm down.

I'm only a mother ****er because I ****ed your mom..lol OMFG jk.

Well, not bad I guess.

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i think you need to calm down.

failure to see any relevance to topic

As a matter of fact, you need to calm down , and read some andrew loomis.

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As a matter of fact, you need to calm down , and read some andrew loomis.

failure to see any relevance to topic


what, no one's at least seen the ezekiel 25:17 scene on youtube?

Woo! Mr. Pancake tag team.
HI FIVE BROTHER!

anyway, the pig thingy's head was too big.

zoomed in, RESIZED

need better crit

I cant really crit the pig head, but I dont see what you consider detailed in that head sketch. I think you have a decent style, but if you want to be able to do decent anime, you need to definitely practice figure drawing. The eyes are different shapes, not just different lines; the nose makes no sense; those ears are way out of perspective. With those in mind, you should know what needs improving. When you simplify something so much, you need a good sense of what part of the facial features you need to draw for that specific expression and perspective. (hence why it is called simplified)

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Woo! Mr. Pancake tag team.
HI FIVE BROTHER!

anyway, the pig thingy's head was too big.

HIGH FIVE




ANDREW LOOMIS MOTHER****ER, DO YOU READ ITz?

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I cant really crit the pig head, but I dont see what you consider detailed in that head sketch. I think you have a decent style, but if you want to be able to do decent anime, you need to definitely practice figure drawing. The eyes are different shapes, not just different lines; the nose makes no sense; those ears are way out of perspective. With those in mind, you should know what needs improving. When you simplify something so much, you need a good sense of what part of the facial features you need to draw for that specific expression and perspective. (hence why it is called simplified)

actual crit

i see, thanks

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spam

It's actually an advice, with a spice of your own cookie.

worst advice ever

what, i cant make one reference to a movie without being tried by a jackass?
gtfo