ok ppls.. for those who watched my previous(first) animation on flash.... this one is much better....

you'll have to remove the spaces
htt p:// ww w.anti up.net/files/9921 6123741battle%20swf.swf

so this is my 2nd animation iv ever made... i did alot of experementing with this one... like i actually attempted explosions and smoke... and unfortunatly they look like crap... but hey its my first try at that stuff:heh:

Excellent work!

It's good, but pretty sloppy.

To tell the truth that was really shitty, sloppy, and pretty much retarded. why is their spaces in the link?

Because he doesn't have enough posts...isn't that obvious? Anyway, he could've only put one space there... :)

seriously i dont really mind if you call it a worthless pile of shit but im still learning with flash so if anyone has some tips on how to improve flashwork id be happy to listen

Never use rubber tool for explosions.
Make your sticks look better.
Easing.
Physics.
Make your particles last longer.
Draw your sticks slowly so they dont get wobbly.
More particles.
More detailed background.


Hmm... I think that's everything you have to work on.

lol ok ty ill keep that in mind

Wow sweet.. I liked it. nice music btw :D

My second looks like shit compared to yours :)

lol hey jadony i randomly went here to see how many post you had.... i have 25 catching up.... also ha i got a lot more post on my thread i have 3 pages omg funny.... also READ THIS IT IS NOT HIS SECOND ANIMATION MABEY PUT ON STICK PAGE BUT NOT IN REAL LIFE...I KNOW HIM HE HAS MADE A LOT BETTER THINGS THEN THIS SO GET WITH THE ****ING PROGRAM JADONY.... LOL SOZ I LIKE CAPITALS AND I RULE I RULE DA DA DA DA NO WAIT LET ME RECAP THAT JAD HATES ME JAD HATES ME DA DA DA DA