I like it.
It`s cool.

Try a thicker stick, only a little thicker and with a better backbone.

Then try this again.
It'll look better.

ok
so even thicker?
ok
but more about the animation plz

its pretty good without any tuts =] nice

i like thick sticks most, very cool btw :)

Its decent :)

Med beginner.

damn
i was aming 4 high begginer
what do i have 2 do to improve it?

Quote from klassen

damn
i was aming 4 high begginer
what do i have 2 do to improve it?

You use proper grammar.

Thanks for pointing out my obvious english language flaws
but more about the animation

Quote from Gyohdon

You use proper grammar.

lol yes, he's right

oh yes
i recall many elites now who were originaly med begginer but were able to use proper grammar so they their animations suddenly became fluid and well eased.
its all coming together now
less sacasm more about the animation