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The Redeemer! (9mins movie)

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Oct 28, 2008 5:53 PM #282096
A looooooooooooong movie!
Enjoy it!!
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Oct 28, 2008 8:43 PM #282175
Wow amazing. 9/10. And Woot first comment.
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Oct 28, 2008 11:57 PM #282336
Awesome, You Finally Made It :d
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Oct 29, 2008 6:22 AM #282475
Pretty good...
What kind of alternate ending is that?:Dope:
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Oct 29, 2008 8:34 AM #282508
HOLY **** WOLVERINEJOSEPH
Could do with a loading bar though :/ And the voice acting wasn't too good. Gets an 8 from me.
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Oct 29, 2008 11:44 AM #282547
@@".....
it's rating even lower than my starwars series??
unbelieveable...
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Oct 29, 2008 1:13 PM #282578
To be honest it wasn't that good. You know how to do some good moves in fighting, but in that animation there was only a few minutes of fighting in the 9 minutes.

Its tricky, because if you had just done straight fighting people would say "put more story in". But honestly the story was boring and generic.

The only part that I really liked was the matrix-like fight with all the normal guys. In contrast, the final fight was generic and way too long.

Good job for making it though.
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Oct 29, 2008 3:13 PM #282609
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@@".....
it's rating even lower than my starwars series??
unbelieveable...

What Bonk said. Although it's obvious you put lots of work into it, and I congratulate you for that.

Finally, a project with a proper story...
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Oct 29, 2008 3:47 PM #282621
Really nice movie and original story, altough you should work on easing and stuff perhaps.
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Oct 29, 2008 3:56 PM #282626
Some parts were cringe worthy, the voice acting, the story, several simple animations and sounds.

But you really excelled in some of the fighting moves, there were a few animations in there that really looked great.
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Oct 29, 2008 5:35 PM #282660
Everything was good, love the easing, the slowmotion and all, the only thing that buged me a bit was the voice acting and the lip syncing, but good job overall.
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Oct 29, 2008 10:29 PM #282788
I had really high hopes for this movie. When I saw the preview a while back, I thought "This is Joeseph? Wow! He's gotten so much better!!"
After such a long time, the final project was just below what I thought it would be.
Yes there were parts where your progress in animation had reached a peak (The first fight was truly amazing), and there were other times where I thought that you showed you rushed (work on refining the voice quality please!).
Having said all that, this movie shows that you have potential to be one of the next great animators on the net.

I give it...

8.5 / 10

(Ps, work on a more original story-line)


Edit: Lol at the hidden ending. X_X
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Oct 30, 2008 3:13 AM #282946
you are right..it is real that some places are rushed
Also, the storyline is really a bit boring...haha...lack of creative..
HAHA, the voice acting is bad coz I am a chinese who poor in english, i can't speak like you guys~
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Oct 31, 2008 9:59 PM #284006
Dude.... Your chinese?
Ohh about the movie: Yeah it was kinda crappy at some parts but the fights.
Im gonna describe the fights: A-V-C-U-M - Awsome. 8/10
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Nov 2, 2008 2:05 AM #284882
Quote from WolverineJoseph
@@".....
it's rating even lower than my starwars series??
unbelieveable...


Its because the standard of animating was much lower back then, when you made star wars series. Now its pretty high.

It was very stiff, and some things weren't eased well. Also the voice acting LOL, it was pretty bad. And the ropes >_> And lol at ''the final test'' :P '; you passed;

But wasn't his mission to save jeff? >_>

BUT, when the fighting came II was pretty impressed. Not the best movements, but the choreography and the angles, the blur, the speed was great : O
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