I couldn't watch it all, I got so bored.
Work on everything.

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I couldn't watch it all, I got so bored.
Work on everything.

Kinda the same. Lucky there is someone that is ''real'' though, then all those others that just buttkiss : P

I won't put it as harsh as Sunder Forge, but I didn't think it was very catching. The beginning didn't drag me into it, to make me want to continue watching. The battle was also pretty slow paces, which made it worse. I closed it down when the frog dude attacked, but I will try to watch it all tomorrow.

Havn't seen a lot to C&C though, but I didn't really like how you did the trails on the firething.

How come I see a thread only when the non conformists come in to raid on the cock suckers' parade? Now I'll never be cool.

It's a great animation for what it is: a short that is done in your spare time for fun for a forum. If that were not the case, people would have a reason to be extreme about the second acceptable mania to even come out of stickpage (that i can think of right now, but second or not, still in the single digits).

I'm sure if you didn't have such a huge schedule on a small goal, and had more time to please people aesthetically, this project would look ten times nicer, but even without that it's well animated and has a great length next to everything else that comes out of here.

Good job.

Nice work on this, good effort. The gun bits were cool, and some of the powers were creative and funny. I also especially liked the close ups.

On the other hand, it was a bit bland. The fighting was pretty standard, and with no sound effects I only had the sort-of-relevant music. And then... Linkin Park. I'm sorry, anything from there on was ruined.

Quote from Sunder Forge

I couldn't watch it all, I got so bored.
Work on everything.

There is cocksucking, which I hate.
Then there is the other extreme, with blatant put downs.

I know you want the whole "high standards" image, and the last 10 posts I've seen from you show that. But maybe you should seriously consider lowering your standards enough to actually give him some decent crit and maybe a little bit of credit for all his effort.

Yeah I thought it was slightly on the boring repetitive side :/.

At least I got a mix of positive and negative. That always helps.

AH I killed myself =o
I had the coolest weapon anyway lol 'The Pumpah'

Actually as for me the considerable quantity it enjoyed that. That however it did not have the strength of 1,000,000 warriors, had sufficient strength. In addition as for that like the river it did not flow, however I who am supplied by the half splendid choreography and thought suppose. I consider the prospect of the thing which is another Raffmania there. I when it was, did not take the vigor which that ostriches it is convinced of.

Quote from Mesmay

Actually as for me the considerable quantity it enjoyed that. That however it did not have the strength of 1,000,000 warriors, had sufficient strength. In addition as for that like the river it did not flow, however I who am supplied by the half splendid choreography and thought suppose. I consider the prospect of the thing which is another Raffmania there. I when it was, did not take the vigor which that ostriches it is convinced of.

... uh...

I know right.. Mesmay wtf?

wait, wasn't I in this?

Quote from Raffeh

... uh...

Uhh is correct. Regrettable it does not win prize.

Quote from Lixu

I know right.. Mesmay wtf?

I thinking of those which are tried and saying there is "Mesmay of the just you are surprised rather clearly".

Im gonna stop talking that that soon. Its pretty boring :/ and no-one understands

Quote from Mesmay

and no-one understands

Please use understandable word order and commas then. I want to understand your post to get what you're trying to crit him with, but wut?

Quote from Bonk

Then there is the other extreme, with blatant put downs.
It wasn't meant as a put down, I just say exactly what I thought, when I say "everything" I mean "every-freaking-thing"
I didn't think anything in it was great, ; the particles, the movements, the sticks (changed size) the fight scenes, the effects, all seemed to need work. I closed it after I saw the yellow gun guy, I couldn't watch it all.

I know you want the whole "high standards" image,
I point out all the mistakes I see, yes.
and the last 10 posts I've seen from you show that.
That's where you're wrong, the last animation I posted about I said it was "awsome" ... and it was.
But maybe you should seriously consider lowering your standards enough to actually give him some decent crit
See, every time I crit Raffi, I go over the same things, movements, particles, effects, it never improves, doesn't look any different, I don't see the point anymore
and maybe a little bit of credit for all his effort.
:Sweating:

. . .

*Notices bonk's post*

Quote from Bonk

There is cock sucking, which I hate.
Then there is the other extreme, with blatant put downs.

I know you want the whole "high standards" image, and the last 10 posts I've seen from you show that. But maybe you should seriously consider lowering your standards enough to actually give him some decent crit and maybe a little bit of credit for all his effort.

As if Raffi took it personally... I don't think grubber has to even put out an effort to defend himself from a post that is actually TELLING him how to crit and be nice on the internet when he only pointed out faults without pointing out the pros that EVERYONE already said.

D:<