you dont have to draw the black outline...all you have to do is draw the guy.....and then theres a tool...its the first tool next to fill bucket....just click on that tool and select a color...and click on your guy and...walah....there u go...anyway..any comments on my small animation
?

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you dont have to draw the black outline...all you have to do is draw the guy.....and then theres a tool...its the first tool next to fill bucket....just click on that tool and select a color...and click on your guy and...walah....there u go...anyway..any comments on my small animation
?

I think it was really smooth you should draw scenery....moving it would look grrrrreat!!!!

i did do a ninja running thru the forest...right now im doing my first fight scene...haha....but yeah..ill work on the background as soon as im finished

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i did do a ninja running thru the forest...right now im doing my first fight scene...haha....but yeah..ill work on the background as soon as im finished

Sweet dude....I think it will look good....Cant wait to see a fight scene.

ok, sorry about the last bit It only says....

please note Only 188 stickmen where killed in the making.....
OWNED

yeh its rubbish But its my first please give me some pointers

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ok, sorry about the last bit It only says....

please note Only 188 stickmen where killed in the making.....
OWNED

yeh its rubbish But its my first please give me some pointers

uhmm i think that everything kinda went too fast and the viewers probably had a hard time to c wats happening... try to make the scenes more longer and make the animation more smooth....also at the end i always add a couple of frames so that people can see the ending. i guess its not that bad for a first

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its really bad. because you cant really know what was going on in that anim. work work and another time work

http://www.swfup.com/file/24475
Running Test

earlier people said i should work on making it more smooth and work on walking, so here it is.Please rate me!!

sorry,but i hd it way slower, ok.

King kev, this section is for Flash animations.

This:


Not this:


The Pivot section is two section below this one, if you couldn't read.

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King kev, this section is for Flash animations.

This:


Not this:


The Pivot section is two section below this one, if you couldn't read.

maybe it is flash that looks like pivot....

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http://www.swfup.com/file/24209


i still want ti work with basics

The sticks head is messed up, keep it consistent, thats what the onion skin tool is for. Add more frames, it looks really choppy. When you run, you lift up in the air a bit, its like a mini-jump. Speed-lines looked like crap but don't worry about them now, just work on the basics.

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Okay, first off do not put "owned" (I feel dirty just saying it) in any animation/drawing/pivot, its a stupid term for stupid nubs. You don't want to be a nub do you?

Anyways, its pretty horrid, but I've seen much worse for a first timer. Add more frames in between, don't draw sticks with necks, it just looks stupid. Just work on basics for now, running, walking, jumping etc...

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http://www.swfup.com/file/24475
Running Test

More frames.

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maybe it is flash that looks like pivot....

No its pivot.

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maybe it is flash that looks like pivot....

It's not Flash. Can't you tell the difference between a Flash animation and a Pivot animation? The stick's edges were all pixelly and he added a black line for the ground like all Pivoters do when they make a ground.

That stickman looks like it was made by a random assortment of letters and numbers. I like it. However, if you already know what's wrong with it, why don't you fix it?