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Sep 2, 2007 6:22 PM #56276
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SCP(SimpleCrapPunch)


Well, it's Simple,Crap and what may look like a Punch.

C&C plesh.

Eh, the style looks kind of impractical to animate with, but its your decision. The punch wasn't all that great it was choppy and the arm shrank some.

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This is my third flash i call it Super Run

Super Run!

Its really choppy, but that may be because of the way the stick goes downscreen throughout the entire run.

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So, it's the start of a combo thingy I thought I should try. He shrinks a lot. http://www.swfup.com/file/24895

Add more frames, and give him some feet.
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Sep 2, 2007 9:10 PM #56348
I dont really know what I should animate so I was just bored and I came up with this funny little short =] Rate plz

http://www.swfup.com/file/25004
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Sep 2, 2007 9:25 PM #56362
Hey, i'm new here (woot, first post!) so feel free to pick apart my short anim...

(edit: see bottom of post)

I'm not new to flash, but I am pretty much self-taught and all my experience comes from just playing with flash in my free time over the years, so I am not the best... anyway... criticism appreciated.

Since I can't post URLs technically until I have 20 posts, I'll have to refer you to my signature for the link. thanks.
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Sep 2, 2007 9:41 PM #56370
You don't need 20 posts, Jam. Just take your link and use SWF tags. It should look like this:

[SWF="YOUR LINK GOES HERE"]width=??? height=???[/SWF]

Make sure the link is a direct link. In other words, it has .swf at the end of the link. And replace the question marks next to width and height with the width and height of your Flash movie.

If you're confused, see this tutorial:
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=23055
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Sep 2, 2007 10:07 PM #56394
Will someone rate my movie ^^^ lol
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Sep 2, 2007 10:48 PM #56412
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I dont really know what I should animate so I was just bored and I came up with this funny little short =] Rate plz

http://www.swfup.com/file/25004



Lol that was funny..it was a little choppy but still cool.
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Sep 3, 2007 12:17 AM #56452
Thanks, what could I improve on? (I will try to minimize choppiness)
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Sep 3, 2007 12:42 AM #56463
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Thanks, what could I improve on? (I will try to minimize choppiness)


not much i can say it was pretty solid..

my vid

http://www.swfup.com/file/25068

c&c is nice

it is just a start
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Sep 3, 2007 4:19 AM #56501
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I dont really know what I should animate so I was just bored and I came up with this funny little short =] Rate plz

http://www.swfup.com/file/25004


The blood was horrible, why was there white and black in there, and whats with his what I'm assuming is his leg? It was sticking out in a very strange position.
The mouse was too slow, just look at the way you move your mouse around, its not that slow, its fast and sudden.

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not much i can say it was pretty solid..

my vid

http://www.swfup.com/file/25068

c&c is nice

it is just a start

For more than half the animation it looked like you just moved the stick up and down the screen. The running was too slow to make the green stick try to slow down like that. The running itself was too choppy and had too many sudden movements.
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Sep 3, 2007 5:03 AM #56506
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You don't need 20 posts, Jam. Just take your link and use SWF tags. It should look like this:

[SWF="YOUR LINK GOES HERE"]width=??? height=???[/swf]

Make sure the link is a direct link. In other words, it has .swf at the end of the link. And replace the question marks next to width and height with the width and height of your Flash movie.


ah. thanks. Sorry, but I've never had to post my movies online before. ;)

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Sep 3, 2007 5:11 AM #56507
http://www.swfup.com/file/25125

my newest please c&c needed...

i know toward the end it is fast im gonna fix it....what do you think so far...
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Sep 3, 2007 5:16 AM #56508
Why must you fly so much? Why! Stop flying! Get your head out of the clouds and come back to animating earth!
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Sep 3, 2007 5:19 AM #56509
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Why must you fly so much? Why! Stop flying! Get your head out of the clouds and come back to animating earth!


I have a dream...and it's name

FLIGHT
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Sep 3, 2007 5:20 AM #56511
Flying is only cool if you use a bunch of sexy particles and such. What Fps do you do at? I suggest 18. Because it was too choppy.
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Sep 3, 2007 5:22 AM #56513
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Flying is only cool if you use a bunch of sexy particles and such. What Fps do you do at? I suggest 18. Because it was too choppy.


dude thats funny.....i am using 18
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