Beginners, post your Flash animations here.

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Cai Johnson
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Oct 25, 2007 3:39 PM #65039
Well... I don't posting for a while on this forum... but I create another two anims, just tell me what do u think (C&C only... an maybe a rank, pls?)

http://www.swfme.com/view/1014742
http://www.swfme.com/view/1100792
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Oct 25, 2007 3:43 PM #65040
Rank: Med beginner maybe. I'm not good at giving ranks.

Blood on the first one is bad. Both are choppy, and needs more easing. The flip looks unnatural by some reason.

But good work.
Cai Johnson
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Oct 25, 2007 6:01 PM #65056
Thanks... any more comments?
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Oct 25, 2007 7:22 PM #65065
The first one is not that bad, the blood although is bad.

The second one is really choppy and stiff.
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Oct 25, 2007 8:13 PM #65074
Here is my latest one it is just a blood test
http://antiup.net/view.php?id=1579
C&C please
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Oct 25, 2007 8:25 PM #65077
The blood should splash with more frames, I mean it shouldn't splash that quickly.
It's like if one frame he looks normal and in the other one, there's blood everywhere, It shouldn't be like that.
Also try to make some little blood particles.
Nice background though...reminds me of stick killing arena (Or something like that)
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Oct 25, 2007 8:32 PM #65078
Hi, please rate this and comment or whatever...
http://www.stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/cliff-diving.html
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Oct 25, 2007 8:35 PM #65079
Did you do this?
I have seen this at least 3 times.
Two posted here and one in Newgrounds...With a diferent song.


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Chaozu

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Oct 25, 2007 8:36 PM #65080
i made the quality better, then it got messed up..
OCC nice...
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Oct 25, 2007 8:53 PM #65084
hey thanks daneximuz for the coments and yes i forgot to say,yes that is the background from killing arena lol well credz to that dude that made it.
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Oct 25, 2007 9:40 PM #65089
second sight its ok but stiff like crazy and work on doing movements with your sticks.
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Oct 26, 2007 1:36 AM #65202
more of a moving drawing, due to the limited animation (part of why I am posting it here), but whatever:
http://www.antiup.net/view.php?id=1614
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Oct 26, 2007 1:53 AM #65209
Wow very awesome fullbody.
That actually can be posted in a new thread if it was a little but more longer.
Very nice job.
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Oct 26, 2007 1:58 AM #65211
daneximuz sounds familiar...... (to another person, not another user)

edit: nevermind, I just realized I really was just remembering your NG account. Btw, I read your latest review reply on Green Chronicles, and caught a whiff of braggart. (better than or equal to terkoiz.....) ;) (green chronicles was pretty damned awesome though)
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Oct 26, 2007 2:09 AM #65215
A lot of copy and paste though animate it with that good of drawing and its vets. Actually do more than a simple arm motion.